I don't get your author's note, cause rufus is head of shinra, he's president, tseng is just director of the turks.

Hello there! I began reading this story about six months ago, and it took me a while to read all of it because for the longest amount of time, I had no means of getting online. However, I finally finished and I have a few things to say.

1. You have a unique way of writing that I love. I love the way you portrayed the characters, and thought your plot line was very thoroughly put together. I envy that. I do not have the same ability, and therefore I'm only able to write one shot fics. I applaude you highly, and would like to say well done! Also, I will be reading the sequel soon.

2. Though you're a good writer with good ideas and an apparently amazing thought process, I did notice grammatical and spelling errors. They usually weren't too bad; sometimes just using the wrong word with the same sound (forget what those are called, to be honest), or just minor spelling errors that I barely noticed sometimes. There were times when I would have to read a sentence twice to understand what you were saying though. As a fellow writer (albeit, not a writer who's terribly gifted) I would suggest double and triple editing your work just in case you miss things you didn't notice before, or finding an editor.

Other than that, you're really good and I hope you keep writing. I'll be around to read and look forward to reading more of your fics. :)

That has to be the saddest, most disturbingly beautiful thing I have read in my life. As fan fictions go, this is really good. Despite grammatical and/or spelling errors (which I probably wouldn't notice if I wasn't such a grammar freak), this is really well written and structured, every chapter making sense and linking in almost seamlessly. There are a few continuity points that blurred, but apart from that, really really good job.

I love Reno and Cloud as a pairing, and you really did them justice - the relationship is believable and progresses realistically. Also Cloud's alienation and the 'emo' frame of mind is done really sensitively and accurately, and for that I congratulate you.

This is probably the longest review I've written, and I don't even know if you're gonna read it, but there ya go.

Beautiful work.

This story made me bawl by fucking eyes out. You're talented. [:

Okay first i would just like to say HOLY SHIT! yeah November 15 is the date of MY BIRTHDAY, im sorry but thats pretty cool that you just happened to pick that day out of all the ones in the for Aeris and it happens to be mine (sorry for my rambling but i get hyper relly easily. . .) anyways i really am liking this story so far its funny as hell good job :3

It was very wonderful! i really really love this story, it makes me fucking cry a several times...

i really wish for it to have a sequel.. .

I love this very much, and i feel sad that this story needs to end.. .

but i feel content in reading this for 3 days, 'coz its really WORTH it.!

Thanks for letting us read this wondenful story.. .

Owari.. .

Oh my god...I can't believe I'm just now reading this story. This was pure genius, real emotion. I literally felt like I was in it. I love your work and you ar an amazing writer. I actually cried at one point. You are truly blessed with a gift

damn, that story had me up and down so much i though my head would explode! i absolutly loved it!

i absolutly LOVE this F*IN STORY! i was nearly crying in some parts and it was just a whirlwind of, well stuff i suck at describing xD i think i read this hole story in nearly 3 hours, not even, its 3.30 in the morning and i have skl tomoro but i just couldn't stop reading, i luv it .

goosebumples due to the ending.

nice of you to add the AC ending.

good story

Man, this story makes me happy and sad in radical turns. OUTstanding! Any story that can do this to me gets 4 stars! And I'm not even done reading it, let alone the sequel.

Plus, you're right. Hot Topic RULES. I live in dinky little town, and it's fun to horrify the normals with my slick fashion sense. ;)

You weave a good yarn.

Reno snickers at my spastic behavior and hands me a sex pack, “Drink up Strify boy.”

Sigmond Froid moment? (Wrong spelling) The typo made me laugh so hard when I first read it.

I adore this story I think I've read it so many times.

They are both quite OOC but they are still them if that makes sense? The storyline is just right and I loved the song choice that you picked for the sex scene (which was cut short you meany) as it's brilliant.

This has to be the best story I have read in a long time! It was awesome and I can wait to go read the sequel!

Nice chapter, Cloud is funny when he angsts

~~Arra~~

Aw he got a ride home, cute. Very interesting and again... I LOVE CLOUD AND PENCILS! that makes me very much so happy.

~~Arra~~