shame you ended this its epic

awesome story lol at the part where harry thought ron and draco where having a moment hope you bring out the next chapter soon.

Wonderful idea and I liked reading it. Thanks for writing and please update soon

Hullo leon,

I just have to say that I absolutly adore your delectibly dark and enthralling plot. You make Harry the way I like him; cunning and merciless. As for your learning problem (sorry for bringing it up, I really don't want to make this review unpelasant), all I can say is that I know many that write much worse than you and that have an easier time at it. I have to commend you for your sucess in battleing whatever this disease is. I do have a solutin though, have you ever thought of getting a beta(someone to correct your work)? Many writers have one. Anyways, just thought I'd bring it up since I thought it could help. I hope you update soon, I will definitly be looking forward to another chapter.

TTFN! ;p

My fren, I don know what made you stop writing on this story, but it would be much appreciated if you continued it.

I happened to stumble across this interesting little story and found it quite intriguing. Unfortunately, when I check the date of the last update I noticed it was almost 2 years ago. I do hope you find your muse again and write more of this dark Harry story. As for spelling/grammar/punctuation errors, that's what betas/editors are for. All authors should have someone that can review their work for them. I edit for a couple of people that post here on ffn and elsewhere. A writer in the throes of inspiration usually doesn't take the time to make sure all the rules of grammar are followed. They'll re-read it but will often see what they wanted to say rather than what was really entered into the computer. A beta helps the author tell the story they wanted to. Keep up the good work and I hope you will find the inspiration to write more of this soon.

Ooh! I have a guess. Is Harry going to recruit the Twins? I love evil twins. Please update.

You know. I don't think many people would complain if you did update it. It's a shame there aren't more dark harry/cho or dark harry/ginny fics. The fact you threw in bella only makes it more intresting heh. Maybe one day you'll finish it. Either way, fun read.

All your fics are good but 1 enoying thing is that you use 'has' instead of 'as'.

ya gonna get the twins? i know they have to have a sadistic streak to make all those pranks, that can eaisliy go wrong.

I'm reading your story, "Harry Potter and the Snake Within" and then I got to chapter 7 and read your,"letter to my readers" and I stopped to think back over the chapters that I had just read and to be honest I never noticed anything about your writting that was so noticable that had to be commented on, so my advice to you would be to ignore the haters because their the ones that either can't write a story themselves or are really crappy at it and believe me I've read some real doozies. So I hope you feel better. And I think your story is great.

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i have to say the story is great and hey i think you are a great writer plz continue and i don't mind if you have a problem my brothers have the same problem :) but all i have to say is i love this story lol

P.S. Oh i almost forgot try to ignore morons who can't read a page without yelling and i think you just need to try and ignore ppl like them like i do hope you have a great time writing fanfics like this and a good life.:):)

ooh! ooh! ooh! pick me! pick me!

is it gonna be fred and george perchance?

i'm prolly wrong but it's worth a shot

update plz

i'll be ur best friend!

Really interesting story. Lokking forward to the next chapter.

i c...very wicked this fic is...keep up the good work...wonder who will join in next...plz do informed me on the updates...thanx..