This was an AMAZING story. You are officially my FAVORITE Star Wars fanfiction author

This was AMAZING

Wow. This was incredible! I loved every word. I wish it had been a little longer, but still a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Great ending!

Somehow your stories just capture the characters' emotions so vividly. The anguish, the love, the desire. You have a special talent that few are able to rival. This goes for all of your Luke/Mara stories that I've read.

Good story.

ok i am going into nerd mode that was so cool

Draco122

Alright, let me tell you something, I've been playing Star Wars: The Old Republic a lot, recently, and every Sith character I create has to deal with the Dark Side of the Force and its many users. They are all ignorant assholes. They claim power constructed on lies and fear, a power that is temporary at best.

This, is the true power of the Dark Side. Usually, when I see a Dark Side Luke fic I run the other direction, but something, (the Force, for all I know) compelled me to read this. It was definitely worth it. The plot progresses flawlessly and at just the right pace, and grammatical and spelling errors are nonexistent. Very, very good work!

I love a happy ending! Great job on this fic!

She was right to deny him I was hoping she would.

That was quite demeaning and demoralizing. Best way to make a warrior woman feel powerless is to kick her ass while constantly man-handling her.

Hmm I like the summary. A dark Luke and Mara pairing is always interesting. Hmm I usually prefer that the girl has SOME kind of advantage. Its kinda unfair how the guy ALWAYS has the upper-hand whether he's the captive or the captor.

THAT WAS LIKE A REAL PUBLISHED BOOK! IT WAS THE BEST STAR WARS FANFIC I EVER READ! :)

Uh, very nice story! :D I like how it's dark, yet not completely dark.

And the title fits the story very well, when you think about it. Well done, indeed.

Love Lora

Nice idea and I liked reading it. Thanks for writing and you are a good author.