And how the fuck do we know who beats who we don't and besides it fucking even get the story fucking straight fuck tard

You know what Naruto lacks in brains and common sense he makes up for on the battlefield and in training so he would be more powerful than sasuke

This was a really good story I can't wait to read more if there is more to the story which I hope there is. You are an awesome writer and don't ever stop. Please write next chapter asap.

lol omg luved this story ur realliey good at writing these nd sasukes paart was interesting i neva thought of him being the uke lol

Continue continue continue. This story is very very good. It needs to be continued and we readers need to read more of this story... please.

Wow, this story is soo refreshing and so very good to read. Too bad there isn't too many people reviewing people just don't know what they are missing.

Anywho i love the originality of the whole thing. It's soo new in comparison of all the other Sas/Nar fics(mine included). But yah hopefully you do find some inspiration in continueing this story.

So yah i really do hope you continue this story.

Wow, you really should continue this, it's so good. I really love reading it... is Sakura and the others going to escape and what of Naruto? Continue please...

Wow... i absolutely love this story it's so detailed and imaginitive. Love that you created new characters and organization. Love that you made it believable and fun to read. I could seriously see this happening. So yah i do most certainly would love it if you continue this story. It is absolutely amazing. It just draws you in.

Update soon please...

Wow, that was simply amasing... Something i would so love to see more of. I like what you did... How you made Sasuke crazy, Naruto more mature in thought and the fact that his eyes were dull until news and being able to see Sasuke again. So you are going to continue right? I mean you should it would be so cool, i wouldn't mind seeing Sakura and the others escape before that dinner with Sasuke, wouldn't they be shocked if they new Naruto watched the fight, and had sex with Sasuke rather then save them or help them during the fight. Though the fight part is understandable, after all he had to look after Aurie...

But yah, update soon and awsome story so far...

Wow, simply wow. I rather do like this story. And of course the cut out scene. Would Sasuke have it done though, truly have him killed... i for one hope not. It would be a shame. And Naruto seems more mature now. lol, i think i like this story better then the manga... no offence to the creator of Naruto and everything in it...

wow O_O that was so awesome! Great story and you even came up with some original characters! They're are pretty good as well.

You know... you need to update :P

Hehe, I like the story though... it's.. interesting to have another organization other than Akatsuki in here... although is their goal only to thwort the Akatsuki?

Hmm... oh well

Awesome fic, I love it! Plz udpate soon!

i love this story. i love it so much. sasuke-kun is freakin' crazy and homicidal! i love how he's not weepy and regretful (for the most part) but, yet, he still gets to be screwed by naruto! it's so great! i especially loved the chapter where naruto was described as being the beginning, sakura was the middle, and sasuke-kun was the end. i thought that was beautifully done and so true. even though i'm kinda bummed that itachi is already dead, it's best that way because itachi's death really affected sasuke-kun and i think that is partly what makes him so unstable. but is orochimaru-sama still alive? i can't remember if he's dead or not. anywho thank you for making sasuke-kun so fucking kick ass but still able to get topped by naruto within 5 chapters. i love how you wrote all the characters, can't wait for more naru/sasu action, i actually really liked the OCs, and update soon please! there, i think that's all i gotta say.

yay! MORE YAOI ACTION1