| Reviews for Viper |
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Angelov chapter 1 . 4/2 I have to tell you that you helped me learn English! Gosh, years ago I searched for fanfiction of Harry Potter in English because I had already read the majority of the good ones in Brazilian Portuguese. Yours was the one I found online, nearly a decade ago! Because of you I was so interested in the premise and in reading it as a whole that I started translating each and every single word in English (at the time I didn't have good internet and I had to use an actual dictionary!). Thank you so much for your work. As you can see, I'm not 100% native in English, but my understanding improved astoundingly. I've finally found this fanfiction again and I'm in for reading it now that I can actually understand the majority of the phrases in here haha once again, thanks! |
muttjc2003 chapter 19 . 3/5 Wow, this was a wild ride. I really enjoyed it, always love an insane Harry. Great job! |
kanukaianderson123 chapter 2 . 2/3 9 years old right? |
Bele chapter 19 . 1/27 oh yeah what a crazy story, and that twist... nope I did not see that coming... beautiful. crazy as hell but beautiful. thank you very much for sharing your story! |
Halivor chapter 4 . 11/28/2019 Awesome story so far. I’ll have to see where it goes, but for now it’s must read for anyone who likes dark harry. |
sakurahan chapter 19 . 10/19/2019 This story is amazing! I love how you written Harry tho the epilogue was lacking answers for the questions brought up. For example Where is Serious, why did Shou want to kill Harry, why didn't Harry try to find away to speak with Shou (restoration stone) Would Harry and Voldimort end up being partners etc. Would doumbeldor ever find out that Harry is Viper, etc. There so much to know but the ending leaves more questions then answers. It was sad ending but I still had fun reading the story. I hope you make a continuation. |
FearThePuggles chapter 7 . 5/10/2019 Did you mean to have Hermione say Harry's name was viper? Pretty sure she didn't find this out yet, what with her inner dialogue and all. |
Jay chapter 9 . 3/12/2019 “Grammar from Hell”! Ha, well at least you’re self aware, hm? That’s worth some points, of a kind, right? I like your story but then I love dark or amoral characters. One thing, it’s “disorienting” not “disorientating”, a common mistake. You might like “FirePhoenix8”; {this site} she has some grammar & style issues too (adverb-itis? adverb-fu?) & a few cringe-y scenes, but she is very talented & her stories have some great characterization & DARK world building. No one’s a villian in their own mind after all, except for your Viper! I’m curious as to where you go next. (Another of my favorite Dark Harry stories is Brigade’s “Enveloped in the Darkness” which has the best Voldemort ever; evil but entirely sane, he’s what makes the story pop. Sadly, the author is now graduated college & out in the “real” world, never to be heard from again...) Sorry for the digressions. Well, not really. |
582Raven chapter 19 . 2/7/2019 That last chapter tripped me out big time. I'm so confused and don't know whether to cry, be impressed by the author, or start laughing hysterically. Imma go bang my head against a desk and read some fluffy one-shots... |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/6/2018 Woooaaaah! |
reddir chapter 4 . 10/1/2018 His may be the first time I’ve read a story that kept Draco as a little shit but still having a reason to honestly respect BWL. |
reddir chapter 2 . 10/1/2018 I got way too much enjoyment from thinking what Snape might be going through here. |
Sky chapter 19 . 8/24/2018 Omigod Sow did it!? I hate him and I really don't understand like I'm in shock. I'm not surprised what Viper did. I love this anyway thank you! |
MikaToshino chapter 19 . 8/9/2018 what no! sow contacted them to kill him? omg I wish he could torture he dead |
Sky318 chapter 19 . 8/6/2018 OMG. My mind is in shock, because I do not understand anything. I keep repeating in my head and I have chosen. God woman are you crazy, that means I love you |