Oh sweet heaven. That was fantastic. In order of the chapters my response was "So cute." "So CUTE!" "Oh my god!" "Aw!" and absolute, In-awe silence. I love the dysfunction. It would be so, so easy for my boys to finally snap under pressure and become, well, this. I love them sane, but this is just as good. In some ways it is better because it is so unexpected. No one wants to go here. I applaud your vision. I was also told, before I read it, that I should skip chapter 5, but I think that's absolute bull! Maybe I just love a good suicide more than my friend does, but i think Chapter 5 is just as strong as the other four.

Keep up the good work.

i really adore and love when duo is like this. when he is as possessive as he is, in this fic. and heero is so cute. because he didn't know what to say, he says the first thing he thinks of, and that's, "i love you".

that was sad. but at least he found his love.

whoa. deep shit. really lovely

Oh God. What an amazing story; beautifully written, and the characters and their feelings... Just... I'm speechless. Oh God...

Well, this was one of the rather more well-written death fics that I've read. Not that I've read that many - ah, the unremittant angst! I can just imagine how the others would react - ouch! Though I like dhow Nataku came for 'Fei, that was very sweet.

Well, that's a nicely hopeful ending, but still rather angsty. It's interesting to see the boys' darker sides written about for a change.

Ah, yes, and so many people overlook Quatre's ZERO experience - he's just as haunted as Duo. And I agree with them both - you hold on tight to the people who you love and who love you back.

interesting thats all i can say other then itsgood

I was dreading reading this chapter because I was worried people would yell at wufei and so forth with the character bashing, but you made it perfect. I love the whole feel of this chapter so sad though also peaceful.

wah its so sad but is this really the end? don't kill wufei...sob

*crying* so beautiful...and tragic, My POV was Trowa's and Wufei...(I wonder what only five would've done...hmm?)

Beyond brilliant. Incredible...

-.- guess he was too weak no? sorry, but that guy just pisses me off.; he’s an insult to the Chinese. With his stupid plastic hair- good fic tho. More heero duo!

O. Good one. Q’s got T’s heart. I’m serious that this was good, but those two REALLY crack me up. lol