Reviews for Silence
Mai-danishgirl chapter 33 . 6/30/2019
Well, I would certainly love to see a video of xenomorphs frolicking in a friendly nanite-ocean.
And of course Kirindi wants to make friends with the planet, the waving part was adorable.

Very interesting how the stark differences between individuals becomes much clearer now that there is time to actually deal with it. Poor Lemura.
Von JamAxe chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
I remember reading this story years ago and it was great. I’m glad you updated but it kinda looks like you changed some stuff so I’ll just read it all again
Mai-danishgirl chapter 32 . 5/22/2019
So we finally got all the players together, what a messy hodgepodge of hopes, plans and ideals.
Tex is gonna have a fit once they find him.

And poor Andrew, that is one heck of a stretch - "He wants to believe it" - Ouch.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 31 . 4/23/2019
I really hope Noasyvé makes it through, she might be the only one who can help getting Eliath sorted out. I am sorta reminded of how some dog breeds are clever enough to understand when things are different, but not clever enough to know how to deal with them. Like, my sister's corgi is fairly clever, she can learn all sorts of stuff, but she freak out every time someone sneezes.

And I guess Karga'te is finally getting to deal with some much needed trauma, regardless of the nature of it. And very interesting that he is seeing Bakarne's death as one of the catalysts for what happened, or is he simply grabbing whatever Andrew feels ashamed about?

Finally Nuitar is freaky, very effectful.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 30 . 4/14/2019
That last segment, I remember you drew that some years ago, didn't you? Very powerful, and the last line is such a good indication of the true lines - to be part of the monsters or to control them.

Huh, and the turist-trap actually works to some extent (and is hilarious).
And so is Andrew suddenly finding himself with a pair of clever xenomorphs, and even if I fear that attack is not going to bring anything good with it, I will never stop loving the image of a xenomorph using a gun.

And indominous is being it's wonderful bratty self, I adore it.
equipagan chapter 1 . 4/9/2019
Ooh, just found this! Really enjoying the different approach.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 29 . 7/22/2017
It is a shame that the tourist-trap plan isnt going to work, it would have been glorious. But it does worry me that they haven't prepared for anything but a human army invasion, they did see some of the stuff Enigma was playing wit.

Hah! I love that you used Indominus rex, I could read an entire story with Karga'te up against it. And the poleepkwa part was neat, liked it a lot that they ended up with potential jobs, even if temporarily, and if they survive the invasion.

Hmm, and that is som pretty clear truth from Ayo, Tex' had all the power to improve the life of not only Karga'te, but all of the humans as well, last chapter of Morphology made that quite clear too.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 28 . 7/17/2017
Waltraud keep rubbing me the wrong way, he is a perfect example of a ruthless businessman with a deceptively friendly face.
Huh, and Andrew is motivated with vengeance, makes sense.
Hmm, so is the puppet an extension of Nuitar, or it's own version? If I understand it right, they can sort of download or imprint a second version of themselves into a biomechanical body with the xeno code?

Poor Jay, even his loved one is keeping secrets from him.

Brr, the child army is creepy, poor Lemura, and poor curious one. Was the cousiosity the defect? Or was it a matter of independence?
Mai-danishgirl chapter 27 . 7/1/2017
So, my guess is that the hominoimorps are related to the Ash Gen? They sound very similar to it.

Hmm, and they are obviously not in the same faction as Ayo, so the Enigma vessels are somewhat rivals? Very intriguent.

Oh, and why would they even want those creepy sex-bot cyborgs? Is it a part of their cover, or is it simply a joke?.

And speaking about creepy, Nuitar is sure hitting a lot of buttons, he is even a huge dick about it.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 26 . 6/26/2017
Ah, so Ayo is a trained force user, with saber and all. Really loved the reactions to the mindtrick, poor Eliath.

Oh Kirindi, it is ironic that even if you are the oldest when counting in years, you are by far the most immature of the xenos.
I quite like the divide between her and Ayo, instinct and hive vs. reasoning and individualism. And it makes so much sense for the characters.

Heh, poor Persephone, Ti'chai-di is effective, but not the most delicate. I wonder if seeing an Auton getting hauled around like that lead to more memes.

Huh, and Xylia is interesting, if I am getting it right, they are weaving darkmatter in multible dimensions?
And that ending.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 25 . 6/18/2017
Right Karga'te, 'cause her being stoic was totally not a coping mechanism from being stuck in a strict and violent society against her will. She totally can't have changed in the near decade since you saw her last.

There is something odd about the sentence right after Kirindi and Ayo meet: "Almost Kirindi asked Ayo"
And when Karga'te is talking with Ayo in the apartment he is bot crossing his feet and standing on them, I think that should have been arms crossed.

Huh, so the Ash Gen and xenomorphs are something like biological rivals? As in two alpha predators fighting for the same place in the food chain? Or was the origin of the Ash genes know to the Engineers/Mala'kak and they programmed the xenomorphs with a kill-command?

Funny how it is Odygos who manages to overcome this, while Kirindi is freaked out, but then again, Odygos is more ready to explore and change when meeting something new. Entering mazes and all that.
Heh, and I love his attempt to give a thumps up.
And if Noasyvé has a warped sence of humor, he is truly her son in all the best ways.

Hmm, and that is an interesting question about hiveminds, and could also be a reason for the Kirindi/Ayo conflict. I see Ayo's point, this appeared to be the whole reason for Noasyvé's talk with Sarah, and especially with how Kirindi is always trying to do away with negative emotions and reactions and her less than stellar understanding of consent. On the other hand Syve is actively trying to solve this issue, and the Krindi/Ti'cahi-di hivemind also seems to be rather flexible, particularly with Odygos in mind.

Yeah, pretty sure that Nutari and Jor are related somehow, and my guess it that Nutari have somewhat succeeded the experiment with the Ash Gen, and that is the freaky thing in the basement. Well shit, Sarah and Lemura is in more danger than I initially thought. Not to mention Jay, I really hope the breeding instinkt isn't an issue anymore.

Oh, and Hah! Talking about gods Karga'te, I think Ayo knows something about that, perhaps even intimately if I am reading the last chapter she was in correctly.

And last but not least: please never leave Shadhahvar.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 24 . 6/12/2017
And finally the new chapter!

Hmm, there seems to be some inconsistensy? Lemura almost killed Bison in chapter 17, but it dosen't seems like it has had any impact?

As for trying to train poor Eliath, hmm, I really like the explanation about mazes, it makes good sense. And rofl at the meme mention, can't really blame the people though, you need to get something positive out of having xenomorphs running around all the time.

As for the last part. Brrh, that was creepy, and I wonder, is this Nuitar's work?
Mai-danishgirl chapter 9 . 6/11/2017
Hmm, did chapter had a good deal of revision, or am I remembering wrong? It does seem a lot more clear what is going on though. Or perhaps I am just enjoying the antics of Odygos too much.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 8 . 6/11/2017
Ah, so the facehugger is not a complete secret now.
Heh, and the carpet line is really cute.
Mai-danishgirl chapter 6 . 6/11/2017
And my favorite xeno appears, man I had forgotten that he appears this early.

Hmm, and a small lesson in consent. I liked that.
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