| Reviews for Through The Breaking Of The World |
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anonymous chapter 3 . 8/16/2011 Where did you go? I miss you. This was an epic and NOW ITS GONE!*crys* |
EternalLove chapter 3 . 8/11/2010 Noooo, it was getting so interesting! Your story so far is great. The characters are great and developing naturally with the story. Your attention to detail and grammer is wonderful. I hope you continue with this story! |
yellowchocobo chapter 3 . 4/4/2010 Wow it's been a very long time since I read a good new fan fic in the RK section. I absolutely love it. Please keep up the good work. :) All the best and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Chronic Sleeper chapter 3 . 1/16/2010 XD Yay~ I love your story~ Keep writing~ |
Stelmaria chapter 3 . 1/8/2010 Thanks for making the effort to update, it was a good read. |
pterion chapter 3 . 1/7/2010 Yay! K&K interaction! Hehe..It wasn't much but it's a start. I live for K&K moments. I love where this is going! So, who is Kaoru? And what is it about her past? I'd love to read more so update soon ok... :) |
sirenmergirl chapter 3 . 1/7/2010 I'm loving this. More please. |
caseyedith chapter 3 . 1/7/2010 Great chapter! I love this story, it's got a great action/adventure/romance feel to it. You're characterization of Kenshin here is great, he's exactly the Bakumatsu hitokiri. I've read a lot of stories where Kenshin is just a jerk, but the way you've made him quiet, reclusive, direct, but still the gentle rurouni on the inside is really refreshing, and very well done. I also really like the exchanges between Kenshin and Kaoru in this chapter. So sweet, I just love it! I noticed a spelling error ("storey" should just be "story"-it's early on in the chapter, where it talks about the three story building or something, i don't remember the number of stories...) and a few grammar things. Just so you know. :) Looking forward to the next chatper! Thanks so much for updating this now, it really brightened up my day and my week! Later! -ce |
caseyedith chapter 2 . 12/29/2009 wow, this is awesome! You're writing is detailed, but goes at a brisk pace. A winning combination. It gives the reader the option of reading closely and absorbing all the details, or just getting through it to figure out the plot! And your plot is crazy good. I love how you've characterized both Kaoru and Kenshin. Can't wait until they get more acquainted, it should be interesting since she's meeting him as the Battosai :). I would just watch out for some spelling errors. Ooh, I am so excited! :) Update as soon as you can! |
caseyedith chapter 1 . 12/29/2009 I love this! You covered a lot of time in this prologue, but you made it flow really well. I am so interested in what comes next; this has such a great beginning. Can't wait to read more! :) |
sirenmergirl chapter 2 . 12/27/2009 Was...so...good...must...not...squeal... |
IceQueenBarbarien chapter 2 . 12/26/2009 Oh awesome D, even tho I liked the old one too, this one is a bit better than the other one, i like it aswell D, thanks for the update and merry xmas! |
nma5 chapter 2 . 12/26/2009 Very Good. Is this story based on Samurai X (just a little bit) but instead of Tomoe there's Kaoru? Kenshin is also the battosai. I always did like him in Samurai X better he's much cooler and sexier. |
pterion chapter 2 . 12/25/2009 Hmm...things are definitely getting more interesting. Got my attention alright! Well done! Update soon yeah? |
lems chapter 1 . 12/24/2009 well revoew makes any author write faster... well maybe except me, but great work, i would love to read the rest of your fic and so i hope you're going to update soon |