Great Chapter keep them coming :D!

I love it!

At first i was thinking, 'this is a great story',but when it turned into Bast-Xlenn,i mean meekaleXlenn it went so doesn't deserve lenn.

Meekale is the coolest i'm glad he beat up Tiergan

awwh. i really hope Tiergan turns good and saves Lennia, I think Tiergan and Lennia would go good together, sorry MeekaleLenn lovers

Man, I still hate that Elvaan bastard. I hope Lenn or someone will do something about him. But still, happen to the smugglers, I really like those guys.

Please, update soon.

I hope there's nothing happen to Jakkob and his crew. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter. Update soon.

wonderous keeps getting better looking forward to the next one. that tanis guy sucks...i dont see why he treats her like that...royalty none the less...why do i have a feeling hes gonna get whats comin to him

Great story so far, i mean wow! I really love it and can't wait to see what happens next. I was thinking about putting my own story up and can only hope its half as good as yours. please update soon!

wow...alot to take in...lenn seems to have a really hard life oh and btw ff7 advent children isnt coming out to 2007 *cry* well lookin forward to the next chapter. later

-vigi-

excellente very enticing makes me feel like im there with them

Fantastic! This is definatly one of the better fanfics ive read. Poor lenn...oh any chance she is based off of you?

A very good story so far, i'm interested on where youre gonna take it. As for the Advent Children thing you should look into BitTorrents, plenty easy to get it there (Subtitled of course) but still very very good. . keep up the good work.

Man, Tanis and Tiergan are such a bunch of pain in the ass. Anyway, I like the chapter. update soon.

Excellent work. Can't wait for more.