uhhh part 24 and part 25 are the exact same chapter it seems...

I just want to say that, having come upon this story in the last few days, I am very much in your debt. This story did steal a fair amount of my sleep and brainpower, but it also gave me a lot of joy and fear and relief and hope. I think your command of the world, of the characters, and your truly compelling writing style are unmatched in this fandom.

Now, I know it has been ages since you have done any Gundam Wing writing, but if you were ever to come back to it, I would be first in line to give you thanks and cookies. I adore your Quatre, your Heero, your Duo, your Trowa, and your Wufei. More than I can even write. I love how you define them, how they mix with each other. I love the deep connections you forged between them. I love Quatre's empathy and how it impacts them all. And if you were ever to come back and play in this world again, I would be very, very happy.

All I can say, then, is thank you for this epic ride. I'll be reading this story again and again, I just know it. Thank you for everything your fic brought me in these last few days.

I really like your story and thought you might like to know there is a bit of a technical problem. You have Part 24 up twice, where it should be and where Part 25 should be. Part 25 is where Part 26 should be. Part 26 is not there at all and Part 27 is where it should be. If you could let me know when this is fixed I would greatly appreciate it.

This was incredible! I've read books that were less compelling. Thank you for the taking the time and having the dedication to write this, and for sharing it with us. I hope you keep up the good work and grace us with your talents again soon!

I started reading this a long time ago but never got to finish it. Now that I have I can safely say that it was wonderful.

I do have a few things to say about it eeven though it is a little late.

First, Wufei would never karate kick Quatre's butt. Karate is japanese and if you want to get really technical it originated in India. Second, if Quatre were to really have lost his kidney he would have had to go through dialasis (totally spelled that wrong) every few days.

Those were the main things. The little things was just the spacing and puncuation. Oh, and how you kept putting three billions. There should have been no s on the end of billion.

Anywaaaaaays...loved it!

-Shama

I can't believe you have so few reviews for this story. I felt like reading some good GW fic and browsed ffnet this afternoon for the longest ones and really, I wasn't disappointed!

This story was breathtaking and really well written. You managed to balance just the right amount of romance and action and I spent hours today reading it non stop!

Plus, the fact that you are French as well blew my mind. You writing as evolved a lot along the chapters and it was truly a pleasure to discover this story.

Thank you!

This story was the most amazing thing I've read in quite some time.

The grammar needs some work (particularly the first half of the story, where it's the worst), and there are conflicting word tenses, but the meaning is still there, and the way the story flowed allowed me to overlook it.

Each character was fleshed out, and came into the story at just the correct time. It felt like Trowa's character was a little rushed, but it still worked out.

The humor had me laughing out loud one moment or silently chuckling...and then the serious scenes had me glued to the screen.

The chapter lengths were perfect...they weren't too long nor too short, and ended at the correct places. I usually enjoy stories with more of a mysterious air to them (where the reader doesn't know what the enemy is up to), but I must admit that I greatly enjoyed it this time since it was a necessary part of the story to bring it all together.

I want to particularly compliment you on the emotion you put into the story, and the chapters where Quatre's father dies. It felt real. Not like a television drama, but like real life. And after that, the story came even more alive.

I hope you keep writing and improving your skills in grammar and word tenses, and when you have them down, I wish you luck if you try to get published with something original. You have a gift for story telling, and I hope you keep up with it.

Kudos on a job well done! w

I'm IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!

change the caracters and you can actually make a fortune out of this! it's utterly GREAT! i know i'd be the first to buy!

GO QUATRE X HEERO! they're so perfect for each other! more than the simple 3x4

Il parait que tu es française , alors je ne vais pas risquer de faire des fautes d'anglais, et je te dis mon admiration en français.

Cette fanfic est...tout simplement extraordinaire !

J'adore le couple 1x4, et leur relation est ici vraiment magnifique : on passe du "je vais te tuer " à "je t'aime plus que tout", et je trouve ça ...délicieux :ça peut paraitre bizarre comme mot pour décrire ça, mais c'est plus ou moins ce que je fic est comme une délicieuse friandise, à la fois savoureuse, et complexe, avec de nombreux niveaux de saveurs : tour à tour triste, pleine d'amour et d'émotion, drôle...

La psychologie des personnages y est complexe mais très bien décrite. Les évenements et les émotions se succèdent pour le plus grand bonheur du lecteur affamé (je suis restée à la salle d'info de la fac pour connaitre la suite plutôt que de travailler...)

Alors,franchement, un très grand "bravo", et un encore plus gros "merci" !

Dude, this story is awesome!

I mean it's just WOW. How you manage to twist the whole thing into a sweet little story with just a god dose of angst humor, romance and all in between is amazing. I love it! I'm almost sorry to see it's over but the ending was worth it. Man, I'm smitten with this story. Please create another masterpiece like this again?

Thank you very much for your dedication and original idea. This story has made my day.

~Amarillis

I loved it.

wow.i think i lost all respect for quatre in this chapter. He is just the biggest spoiled brat ever! I mean he recklessly puts his life in danger and doesn't understand why duo and heero have high tensions. Its perfectly common for people to put blame on other people when things go wrong. And i hardly call that fight heero/duo had, a fight over quatre. That was just...i'm at lost for words. I freaking wanted to punch quatre in the face for his selfishness. I mean if heero/duo derserved a lecture then quatre deserved a beating for his selfishness and frankly his own stupidity (not that i really think he deserves a beating maybe a good slap across the face to WAKE Up) Anyways you probably would completely disagree with me since you repeatilly put quatre in a good light in this story but the quatre in this chapter really pissed me off. But i love the story so far. i shall keep reading. good job.

Wow you know your fic is so good and absorbing that I actually didn't notice Trowa wasn't in this fic until now, lol. Oops it just slipped my mind and I usually notice when a characters not in a fic. Well anyway I'm still loving it.

Oh come on, the Chinese Terror, the Perfect Gentleman and the Rock n’ Roll Priest...lol. I love it. Wonderful nicknames for them. It definitely fit.

I'm rereading this for the 'who knows how many times' but I just have to say my favorite part of this chapter...well besides the Heero and Quatre cuddle moment was

"Allah, save me !”, Quatre prayed.

“Does Allah know taekwondo ?”, Wufei asked.

“I don’t think so”, Quatre answered, completely puzzled. “Why ?”

“Well then he can’t save you."

I was in a fit of giggles. Anyway I must continue reading, because it really is an awesome fic. I love the whole 'I'm going to kill you' then 'Oh wait I must protect you because I really love you' thing. Well its more to it than that, but you know what I mean.