This was beautiful. That last line really cinched it and gave me the shivers. Great job!

Short and sweet. Good job.

another great fic. there's a really good rhythm to this, kinda poetic almost. and I think it fits Tinga very well.

Great insight into Tinga, wonderful imagery, and love your deceptively simply style. These short pieces you write are very haunting-still can't get "Sifting" out of my mind and I read it ages ago.

I know it takes me forever to read through fics but you've written so mnay good ones. I love this one too. Such a simple idea, and you take it to a new level of understanding, really feels like we're inside her head. Very enjoyable and interesting. Good characterisation and I especially loved the description of her brushing her hair, still maintaining a little Manticore efficiency or feel even though she's trying to escape it all. (sorry for me waffling on!)

I love this fic also, fitting to Tinga's character who is briefly mentioned. I can definitely see Tinga like that. Great work. I'll be waiting to read the next one you come up with.

Beautifully written. Thanks for writing those short fics, they fit into the characters perfectly.

Oooh, awesome fic. Very awesome Tinga POV. There's such power in this... Great job. :)

Nice story! I really liked it! Good work! -LadyCallie

a really good character outlook! keep it up!

Pretty damn good. I like how you see her.

this isnt what i expected... but its good, real good... i like it!

Great story! I love your imagery and expressions, especially "freedom made tangible". You captured her feelings !More!More!

Beautifully written, with some good insight into Tinga's character. Keep it up.