| Reviews for Not Your Average Marriage |
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Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 I have been reading your stories.. for.. forever it seems. I've been through your CCS, Naruto, Prince of Tennis, and god knows what else but the one thing these stories all have in common is... I loved every single one of them. Your writing ability and acute perception to the creators' characters' personalities/quirks/etc are oh-so, so much appreciated as these are qualities that make writers like you stand out. But I still can't get over the fact that I missed your Shaman King stories! I didn't even know you wrote for this fandom (love to Tina for sending this request, and love to thee for going through with it). And best of all, it's a HaoAnna one! I like YohAnna as well but there is something about HaoAnna that pulls me stronger... perhaps you just demonstrated it perfectly here. I've had my fair share of reading this couple but yours is the first where ... for the first time, Hao is at peace with himself and at no sacrifice on Anna's part (well, besides the lack of Yoh). It's interesting to see that the happier he is, the more of Yoh's characteristics shows through him. His thought monologue was perfect. You made a simple house chore into one of the most interesting character/relationship analysis ever. And really, house chores was a running theme in Anna's relationship.. with Yoh at least so it's also symbolic. In the actual series and even in most of the fanfictions I've read, I've always saw Hao's fascination with Anna as just that. Fascination and someone who could finally understand him on some level - not love. If it was love then it was a twisted one but here, you gave it a very plausible basis and selfless, too. But at the end there, I can't help but think shouldn't it be 'Something -warm- touched his heart at the word.' - not 'cold'? Because cold implies something numbing and not in the good way. But whatever, everything was perfection ; 0 ; |
complicatedmind21 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 aww.. I really liked this.. I really love your SK stories (lalo n ung mga tagalog).. I hope you write stories more.. |
rumia chapter 1 . 12/14/2005 me like it even though im a yohxanna fan! so wat exactly happened 2 yoh? -sorry i didnt get dat! |
noooo name chapter 1 . 7/19/2005 another heart-ache. Gwa! It's always Yoh. Pity for Hao... Nicely done...oh how I admore your simple yet cool writing style... |
TaShYrEi chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 your story is so GREAT! i can see a lot of random anime websites inspired by YOU! jeez..i wish i was juz lyk yah...give me YOUR brain! |
faustine chapter 1 . 6/16/2005 hao is such a poor thing! *sweetened to death* |
mitzyred chapter 1 . 3/19/2005 kawaii! O.O oie! "together" brup~! brup~! so kawaii...~! i want to hug you! hey... seriously it is... I'm not a fan of them.. but I think I am now... _ kawaii! |
kiiro-san chapter 1 . 3/18/2005 Woohoo! HANA pairing rulez! But more importantly ... Hao-sama does too! Like! As in all the way! (_)~*! (lolz. server maintenance n nman, ala magawa e. wafak!~ยท) |
asuran-73 chapter 1 . 3/9/2005 nice one! |
Insane Onna chapter 1 . 2/18/2005 Tis truly a "Not your Average Marriage" ficcie! It's ok if you spent 2 months brainstorming it, it's worth it ne? - |
UGLYeww chapter 1 . 2/10/2005 O.O wai wai wai! *_* syao made iit! wai wai wai~ |
patricia chapter 1 . 2/7/2005 "Theirs was a strange two-way exchange of tenderness. Give a little, take a little, and pretty much nothing would be changed. It was making the best out of the circumstances that would last a lifetime. To ask for her heart when he already had almost her entirety would be simply too rude, the way it would be for her to command him not to fall in love with her because she was powerless to reciprocate his feelings. Thus, their one-of-a-kind marriage. Awkward, but he would not ask for anything more." ay! napakasaklap naman .. pero ganun talaga ang pag-ibig... ganun talaga ang magmahal... love your work! |
Intangibly Yours chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 its cute, thought i prefer yona. but since it had hints of yona, i'm satisfied (i have nothing against hao/anna). me likes; write more fic! well, i'm off to go reread ur yona ficcies hehe |
Delton-Ruu chapter 1 . 2/5/2005 And I thought you'll not make another Hao-Anna fanfic. _ Ok, it was cool. Finish it as much as possible ok? |
Takari-san chapter 1 . 2/4/2005 XD YEY! MANKIN XD *pokes* Horo x Tamao naman o XD ehehehehe This was really cute, amusing... and love Hao's Hello Kitty apron XD |