God Please tell me you're working on the next one and please tell me their will be more Tsuzuki and Hisoka angst...

Holy crap. o.o I felt just so mind fucked just now. ;;

That was really good and really well written. You really had my emotions going there and it takes a good piece of writing for that to happen.

I felt rather bad for Abigor. I also really loved how Emna turned out because in the manga he seemed pretty wicked.

How you separated Tsuzuki and Hisoka was heart breaking though I feel that the latter should mature a little more. (Even if I love darling Hisoka.)

Anyhow, I cant wait to see how this all turns out.

So you said this is the final chapter.

Hopefully this means that a sequel will be constructed? o;

Hopefully we'll see some maturation from Hisoka?

Thanks so much for the excellent read!

I like how you have placed "mother natures" current state IRL on to this fic )

Oh crap, now that you've updated I have to reread this. XD Something to look forward to. :)

Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's been such a long time since I've read this fic once more with an update! I still like this fic a lot!

dunno how i missed d updates! gud to c u back in action.. XD

u really kw how to build up suspense! and poor Hisoka... cud really feel his heartbreak and absolute despair and feeling betrayed... really wanted to slap Muraki senseless wen he taunted bon and made off vth Tsuzuki... u cn do dat wen u see him nxt time Hisoka! Oriya becoming a shinigami ws so unexpected...and cool! atlst he's a gentleman...unlike certain psyco doctors we kw... Tsuzuki goin around d bend is nothin new bt painful as always... he dint hv any other choice actually bt he hs to come back...

actually i feel sorry for Ashtarote... its easy to feel betrayed in such a situation...and he's also possessed ne?

errr... is Hisoka gonna b d nxt Enma? The Judge speakin to him privately (wishin he'l get to learn much needed lessons), bein happy bout deir choice, sayin that person will hopefully resolve his issues b4 d ascension...besides d primordials may decide not to wage war againest Meifu considerin he holds Tsuzuki's 'steadfast affections' (provided Muraki dsnt win him over God forbid!) and Abigor himslf hs sacrificed a lot for him... hopefully i'lb proven wrong... simply cannot c him as Enma... how ironic, Enma goin to suffer wat he used to dole out to others...

and i really hope Watari and Wakaba will b back in one piece... Tatsumi and Terazuma hv suffered more dan enuff...stil remember how disgruntled Touda ws wen Terazuma turned out to be d new Golden Emperor... d one who ws at odds vth his master indeed.. XP

Aaaah, I loved Hisoka's reaction. His thoughts and reactions were really good. And oho, Oriya becoming a shinigami! That'd brilliant. For some reason I thought he'd become Enma replacement, don't know why. I'm still massively curious about the good thing that was following him and Hisoka, though I may have missed it during the chewing of my fingers.

And oh please, I hope Watari and Wakaba come back to some semblance of their original selves. I miss Watari something fierce and they could certainly use the help.

And Muraki never ceases to amaze me in how fast he can make me like him then hate him with a passion. Things are not looking up for them, though a little it is (Oriya shinigami with his already mysterious and unknown family history). I want to see Muraki's reaction (and his sad face when hopefully Tsuzuki will reject him? Or goes back to Hisoka). The twat didn't even think about him and what would happen with a new Enma after they teleported, even after having him brought to the others.

Lovely lovely chapter :3

Lovely chapter to read, I couldn't help but feel sorry for Hisoka still. And Oriya's becoming a shinigami? That would be interesting to see, I can't wait to read what else you have in store for your faithful readers.

And Tsuzuki, I can't help but worry about the choice he made even though it was made in a time where his sanity was to be questioned. Hopefully Muraki won't be too foolish and pull something stupid.

And always hoping Abigor will be okay.

Hope you update soon, and take care.

Poor Hisoka, the first couple of paragraphs almost made me tear up .

Got your email hugs back to you. This chapter is great I will be on pins & needles waiting for what will be happen next. Oh by the way YOU ROCK!

Oh, my darling! How I've missed you! It was such a pleasant surprise to see an update on your fic. I cannot believe that our wedding is finally within reach! And what's this about a new sequel? Is that like a wedding gift for me? Sweetheart, you spoil me too much! xD

Anyways, loved your update. Poor Tsuzuki. I just love it when his sanity is crumbling around him. And Ash! What is he thinking? You're making me start to resent him a little and yet I still can't help but hope he'll come to his senses.

I liked it when the primordials and the shinigami banded together in the efforts to protect the individuals that are both dear to them despite their differences.

I think I'm surprised with how strong Hisoka is gradually becoming. But I'm flabbergasted that Tsuzuki went away with Muraki! That evil, sexy bastard!

All in all, another wonderful chapter. Again, you're an amazing writer. It makes me love you all the more!

Love,

Dev

If I was Hisoka... I don't know. His tenacity to get him back is admirable. If I was him I'd feel angry at Muraki and Tsuzuki. Angry, betrayed, lost, and abandoned never mind his state of mind (it's that weird... someone was depressed and crazy and committed suicide and left behind their lover feeling. You understand they did it because they were crazy, but you can't help but feel bitter and angry and think they were selfish, either). And yeah, I'd... probably just temp give up actually. Mostly out of depression, too. Cause frankly after all that went down, Tsuzuki going with his siblings(who care for him in any case and will probably comfort him) would just fill me with misery, abandonment, and hopelessness cause everything is thoroughly fk'ed and this on top of it is just too much. Thus, I'd concentrate on those left behind in hopes that his siblings love him. I guess this is why I'm not a manga hero :).

I don't know how anythings going to get resolved well (once again, if I was Hisoka, fragile mind or not, I don't think I'd be able to trust in or rely on Tsuzuki for anything after this. This even providing that Tsuzuki can come back).

I am sooo glad that I had come across this story! A true well written story. Thank You ! Thank you!

When I first saw this pop up in the top list of my favorites, the only thing I could think was "oh my god, oh my god, oh my god, oh my god..." and as I continue reading all I can think of was "oh my god, oh my god-heartache-oh my god, oh my god, oh my god".

Everything is chaotic and frustrating and this huge tangled web of deceit, jealousy, corruption, sorrow, and Muraki being Muraki and Tsuzuki being the beautifully fragile creature that he is. Abigor really never has a moment of peace-like an avatar of Tragedy though he tires to make things right. Oddly enough, still my heart goes out to Ashtarote...if I recall correctly, that's not entirely him (that or I am just reading what I want...again...), but of course second to that of Hisoka. However with Hisoka I have a feeling that he will continue to grow and overcome this.

I am very glad to see you again. Reading this feels like an old friend...albeit one that wants to your heart bleeding on the ground.

Thank you.

I can't wait for the next sequel and all that cuz i want to know how this all wraps up! good job!