Well written and very funny in places. I enjoyed reading it even though many people don't usually wait months to have sex when there married. But it was fun and different.

Great story and ending, i hope i can read more Quall story tho but its so few of it. anyway kudos for you to manage write this much and im very appreciated it.

ok i laugh at the last words when the old fortune teller said the same thing to the old man LOL

DAMN ty for remind me of Nowe and Eris i forgotten about them until you remind it, i like that game but its sucha long time ago since i play it.

thanks god i was afraid there will be a quifer here, i hate that prick seifer with passion.

dun say that your own story crap and let people judge it, this is an awesome story and funny also, and as a Quall fans i love it.

First off I want to say I love this story so far even though Squall's acting much more an ass than usual. One nitpick I have for this particular chapter, you have Quistis correct Zell's sentence "... at least invited me and ma" to "ma and I" but actually Zell was correct originally. If you remove ma from the sentence and say it again, it becomes "think you would have at least invited me" and Quistis's correction would be "think you would have at least invited I." It becomes clear which way is correct. Now if it was a sentence like "ma and me went to the store" then Quistis's correction would have been accurate because that would be "me went to the store." I think it would have been really funny for Squall to have corrected Quistis's correction. Ooooh, she would have been so mad :D Anyway, sorry about that. I'm kind of overly sensitive to it because I used to do the same thing all the time too. Once again, great story, I can't wait to finish reading it!

Best. AU. Ever. Period.

Ahh, this story was amazing! I absolutely loved it, you wrote it so well! Awesome work!

totally loved it... i was waiting for some kind of a triangle with seifer, quistis and squall... but it never occurred... LOLz but hey, i still loved the story! TOTALLY LOLz

pretty good story,even if it was a bit drawn ,once of the few stories that successfully incorporates our world into their's, even if it is only to an ,a good story in my eyes.

I like this story so much! I'm sorry I didn't review all the chapter, I just read it all in one sitting. I don't find much Squall-Quistis pairing like Seifer-Quistis, and this is one of my favorites! I agree that the story seemed to be made for Seifer at the start, but then again it started to change in the middle. After all, Seifer won't be this angsty and all impulsive thinker, and the story certainly won't be this way.

In other words: Love it!

Wow, it finally finished. I can't help but feel a little bit sad about that, since I've been following it since a little after you started (damn, two years ago?). Anyway, this is my first time reviewing (I think... probably not) and I just wanted to let you know that it was an amazing story and that you did a wonderful job. I'm not even a Quall (*giggle*) shipper at all and I couldn't help but fall in love with this story. Thanks for writing it!

Wonderful final chapter - actually, it's just been a wonderful story all round. Thank you so much for sharing it. :D

GOOD JOB ON THE FINISHING before the new year. Happy New year! And what a gift to give us.