God that was just poetic! i loved the imagry...hell i just loved it all! it was just perfect!...i didn't get the fact that they had been in a car accident but i didnt really feel that Shu was real so i did think that he might have died straight off the bat.

ouch that's sad

but strangely I like it

GUD JOB It was interesting

wow! instense! I really liked the way everything was unclear yet perfectly detailed. Nice job, keep it up!

Woah... ()

...crepy, but neat-o

Now I wanna see that anime ._. Lol

Nice story _ Liked it.

I LOVE IT! THE PLOT, THE DESCRIPTIONS... I LOVE IT ALL!

...They died? noo... The little Kawaii brat and the blode hottie Yuki, dead?

I don't like typing reviews. THe words seem so empty and meaningless. I don't understand what you are saying all the time and you don't understand me. You may think i am eing humorous or racist or some other trash and therefore miss the entire life and emotion i put into my review and i may do the same for you. You may be serious as well as you may not but i'd never really know... Language is a strange thing that can have many meanings...Written language is even more so because you never hear the author's voice you can only guess...Speaking or Saying how i feel about something is more effective than writing it sometimes. obviously i have a very unbalanced hormonal condition at the moment, seeing as i am wasting my time typing about my dislike for reviews and my questionable state of mind instead of actually writing a review...but i go where the tides take me and it so happens that i feel that i need to type my inner feelings to an anonymous person who could care less how i feel or understand the world. Yes, i am slightly unstable and this statement is not meant as a joke. I am just in a bad season, moment whatever you want to call it right now...so don't mind my ranting,I don't rave. o yeah, the review. what was the story about again?... o yeah, i liked it. It was because of your story the my mental/emotional stability tipped. i was unstable for a while now, a few days maybe... it wasn't sad or heart-wrenching mind you, but it did touch some fibre of my being and snapped my stability momentarily. i'm feeling a bit better now. Hope i didn't bore you, cus i am boring myself doing this... i like Baki, although i only watched it once. The fact that love is so strong that it breaks one's stability coincides with what is goin on with me. The summary of the story hurt me and has left me numb and sad. you are a good author. i hope you become a great author. later

-cries- that was really good!

it was really cute and really sad. i liked it

So sad...

I want to cry...

It was good, though.

Will you write more?

That was...that was...SO SAD! *clings to nearest available object, which happens to be a lamp*

Lamp: *falls over, breaks*

...Oops. *thwaps Yuki* WHY'D YOU RUN IN FRONT OF A CAR, TWIT? WHY? WHY? -.-

Anyway, that was awesome, I wuved it, and you're an excellent writer. Keep it up.

I thought it was sweet and sorrowful