wow i like this story so far keep going.

Okay this chapter if i were to be completely honest is bad. Well, not bad but people are out of charactor. It's not like Lupin to call Hermione "Granger" Also it's not like Hermione to say that she can't work with him because he calls her a mudblood. I mean come on since when does Hermione listen to what Malfoy says. Also it's not like Lupin to call Draco "Malfoy" Lupin doesn't go by last name someone like Professor Mc'gonagall would but not Lupin. Next thing Harry thinks that when he is in potions he wants to kill himself. Well, that's not right. More like he wants to kill Snape not himself. Also it's not like fHermione to just catch Harry up in his classes by copying er work. Remember Hermione's against copying. Yes, she let's them sometimes but grudgingly. Ron would let Harry copy from his paper but not Hermione. Hope you don't take this criticism to hard.

I like it so far but you have a few spelling errors. It's Dumbledore not Dumbeldore. Also it's Hermione not Hermionie. Besides that everything's good as spelling goes. One thing is out of place. Dumbledore would never say the things he said in his office. Right after he over slept. Also It's not like Dumbledore to call Harry "Potter" He normally calls him by his first name. It's more like mc'gonagall to call him Potter. Well I'll read on.

I like it very much so far. Are you in denial that Sirius is dead? Well, I am and so is my friend. lol I like any fanfiction that wants to save sirius. What does it mean save the time i lost i will be back. What time is Harry suppose to sav? Well, I'll read on I hope you update regularly and if you're thinking about deserting this fanfic which i doubt please don't you've got a strong plot.

I'm sorry i only read a part of your chapter and something is driving me crazy. It's Dumbledore, not dumbeldore. I suppose you just go it mixed up but it's driving me crazy. Sorry fror misspelling and missplaced letters. If you can't read this review at all i just want to tell you it's Dumbledore not Dumbeore. Sorry let me do it again it's Dumbledore, not Dumbeldore. If this redundant sorry.

That chapter was excellent. I think though it was too short. If you could make it a little onger it would be perfect. I will read the next chAPTER i will read the next chapter. I hope you up date soon.

THE BELL IS ABOUT TO RING!

Good job, please update soon! Soon! Soon! Soon!

Love, Peace, and Hairgrease, Sham.

YAAY

Lupin is back, I love him! :p

Continue soon

Love, Peace, and Hairgrease, Shamrock.

Poor Harry, I know exactly how he feels.