OMG keep writing plz this is really good!

I like your story! Update soon!

Ironically named chappie.

Funny story.

THIS IS an awesome story! plz plz plz Update Soon!

Good ff!

Good chapter! Keep it up

i love this chapter , more plz, but could squid stop being an a hole?

this is AWESOME! i like smoke, but if he's gonna leave, id go with squid. theres a lot of fighting, i doubt mr. pendanski (loved that joke btw) would let it go without a some lecture. plz update! Now! and any1 who likes cgl stories with some romance, check out MisugarQuill's cgl inspection story. :)

Wow, this is great! You seemed to capture D-Tent's mannerisims very well, and it's an original story. Congrats! Lotta fighting, but hey, maybe it's neccessary. ;)

Please continue soon!

Emerald-Flourish

Oh my good golly gosh, you must write more! Poor lil' Squid just doesn't know when to stop getting into fights for girls..He's such a ladies man. PLAYA! Oh and um...Smoke sounds cool, but a little TOO mushy for me...I like the tough, bad guys like...hm...let's see...SQUID! Um...But I really like how you are building up Squid and Claire's realationship..SO COMPLICATED! Aw well...there's always the ups and downs in a realationship..there's mostly downs though...*Sniff Sniff* Poor Claire's so confused with Squid and Smoke..she should know by now that she should go for Squid considering Smoke is leaving tomorrow...SO SQUID ALL THE WAY! But I like how you're not making her fall in love with him in like the second chapter..Most stories do that..One chapter the girl will just have a small crush on Squid or someone..then the next chapter they're already sleeping with him! I think your story is more realistic...Realationships have good times and bad times..and you don't just fall in love with someone in like two days..it usually takes awhile...Plus..we're talking about freakin' teenagers..I doubt that they really even know what real love is...I WOULDN'T KNOW EITHER 'CAUSE I AM ONE OF THOSE FREAKIN' TEENAGERS! But I still love by boyfriend..in my own special way...Well gotta go 'cause MY B.F. JUST CALLED THE COPPERS AND NOW THEY'RE TRYING TO CAPTURE ME 'CAUSE I ESCAPED FROM THE MAD HOUSE LAST TUESDAY! Keep writing 'cause you are very talented!

AH! Why did you stop there! Curse cliffhangers! Ack! The anticipation's killing me. Gah! The only way for me to survive is if you update quickly! Please hurry!

Ok thats bad please update soon

Awesome fic. Its weird though because my name is Claire Anne. So odd reading a fic and seeing "Bye Claire!" Anyway, its excellent. Keep on writin'!

~Blueskiez

UPDATE MORE! PLEASSE! I LIKE IT ALOT!

i luv ur story! update more! )