Enjoyable, as a tub of Polar's ice-cream! (not the Salmon-Swirl one...) I'm glad this story is back! It's so original and in-character! I can totally hear Cortex doing his "dramatic" speech with Clancy Brown's voice. Great chapter!

Oh wow. XD

I just love the way that Ripper Roo screwed the builder and his people! He's better hurry and get tot he hotel to help Cortex and the others. XD

wonderful see this being continued
liking how this adventures evil team going.. tho feel so sorry about doctors situation being broke and homeless

hope there luck turns around

This chapter was definitely worth the wait! I'd been checking at least three times a day for an update, but that's because you've got me addicted lol can't wait for the next chapter!

I thought the bad news was that they thought Ripper Roo died. Good chapter. Worth the wait. Yas.

This is a good story so far! And it's funny too! XD

What a pleasant surprise to see a new chapter of a fanfic that was published in 2005! Seriously, this is EPIC! I remember reading the story, about three years ago and thinking it was such a cool idea. Ripper Roo is so cute in this chapter. I bet he can save the day! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh wow! I thought this story was canceled! Good job, this is awesome!

Write the rest of this. This story is great ! Dingy likes. Whoaaa baby !

This has been a really funny story so far! I love the humor that you had put into these chapters.

My favorite parts was when Dingodile had burned the food and Tiny yelled that no one was there in the quiet hallways.

I would be thrilled to see what happens next in the stoy, but who knows? If it ever picks up again. that would be awesome!

So far, the story was somewhat difficult to follow, it seemed kinda jumpy. Maybe it's because I'm unfamiliar with the game. However, it is somewhat amusing to read.

I could imagine this:

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Liability/house/car insurance inventory list:

-Pancaked car

-Collapsed roof

-Extensive flood damage

-Fire damage in the hotel's dining hall

-Salesman's car set on fire

-Damages caused by "clone-control"

-Various damages in the hotel's dining hall, ranging from burns to bullets.

Recommended Action: Drop the client from all insurance services and deny house/car repair costs. Write off $500,000 as a loss and inform the client that the yearly liability insurance cap has been exceeded. The client must pay for the rest of the costs.

Also, hire additional lawyers.

Funny fic!Can't wait to read more!Update Soon!

Õh noez, you haven't been updating. I love this story! Everyone's In-Character, and the spellign is adequate (although at one point, it should be then instead of than). And sometimes, there's some minor erros. Other than that, the plot idea itself is brilliant!

Okay, usually I only get pleasure out of TP's MSTs but this was as funny as hell.

The concept was brilliant - A cloning machine to beat Crash Bandicoot which goes dodgy.

The Metal Gear Solid dig - er, never heard of him...

The Sonic dig - I nearly died of laughter, but Tiny here...

Tiny: Stupid Dingodile and Joe bringing Sonic into this. Why couldn't they get on with their lives without mentioning that freak? WHY CAN'T THEY FORGET ABOUT THEM? *sobs*

A well written story with excellent gags and cliffhangers - i'd highly recommend this to anyone!

This story was so funny! You're an excellent writer! Tiny was my favourite ("Tiny like Car!") Keep making CB stories!