It was really good but the ending seemed to cut off it made sense but it just stopped
But all in all really good
Keep writing

I really enjoyed your story.I like how it was different from most BBRae stories that I have read. It was a nice change. I also really liked the epilogue.

this was pretty good! the whole thing was just adorable
i did feel like the epilogue was a bit far too forward for my taste, but that didn't mean i disliked it though. i still liked it.
i quite like the mature feel you've added to bb in this, but at the same time i felt he was lacking the core of his character at times? especially since this was in first person. i think those are the hardest cuz you have to stay spot on the entire time, so i'm a bit like starfire on that haha but i can understand why bb's different now.
regardless, i still managed to enjoy this! i quite iked your portrayal of bb and rae's relationship! good fluff, even though i just realized this was written ages ago, haha.

i really like your development of bb so far! i enjoy the mature feel he's developing
and you've got me intrigued to try out that counting meditation style one day haha.

haha, i like where this is going! neat closing scene! i also reay enjoyed the broship between bb and cyborg in this.
looking forward to more

That was kind of... cheasy. Bo that was bad man. Just kidding it was o.k.

ok I liked it alot, but the timeframe jump from chapter 7 to 8 was a bit too long, you know? Otherwise, great story! So cute and funny!

BTW, thanks for filling me in on BB's real name.

Bye! )

Interesting Story, I give you High remarks. Cheers!

Sincerely, Z1

I had read this one when I first found Fan Fiction a little over a year ago. I never left a review, don't know why. This was a great story. I especially liked the ending. Well thought out and well written.

Just goes to show you that "winning" can have more than one definition.

I would imagine BB is thinking: "This is gonna hurt!"

Wow very cool... I like the ending... I always like when a story suddenly skips forward many years... And stories where Beast Boy and Raven are married... So you fulfilled both...

This was your FIRST fan fic? Wow.

Just wow.

The more I read of your work, the more I love it.

This story was wonderfully sweet, and I could also see it right in the series.

Personally, I have a HUGE porblem keeping my characters cannon, so I really admire those who can, and baby, you can! lol

:)

Anyway, thank you for an amazing story!

~Rae

P.S. I REALLY love the way you ended this, it was perfect!

This was very impressive. I found that as I read I didn't really think that Beast Boy was in character in his naration except that I had the thought of "what if this is after the events in the story?" and it all seemed to just click. The perspective really does feel like Beast Boy, just an older and matured one. Very pleasing pace to it all too what with the very gradual progress from the two of them being able to work together to enjoying each other's company was what the pacing for that to happen would and should be. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to see if you're consistent with this excellent quality. I'm gonna guess yes, but we'll still have to see, won't we?

OH! This is so AWESOME! You have to be the best BBxRae writer ever! I'm gonna check out more of your stories and add you to my fav authors list!