you were wrong - that WAS really good, lol! especially for a first fanfic! i liked the way there was loads of action...and the twist! edward pleasure! agh! - and what's going to happen with sabina? i wasn't sure about the friendly alan blunt or alex being given a gun, but apart from that, it was great! btw, sayle IS dead, isn't he? Yassen shot him...?

Ive only read the first 2 chapters not sure yet if i will go on but i agree with master wolfe in that this book was meant for a younger audience and i know this is a spin off but you just cant swear so much in this story cause it just doesnt feel right to all those who have read all the alex rider storys. otherwise nice job suspense was good in the first chapter and 2nd was also good ill see how the rest goes.

Matt! I did not know that you wrote AR fics! Great! I plan on writing one...eventually.

This sounds great! I only read chapter 1 because I have homeschool...but I promise that I am hooked and will read the rest! I love the tension that is on Alex!

Great job...once again and I am glad that this is finshed...because I do not have to wait for chapters!

intresting bit jumpy from alex to blunt but the story line was good better than a lot of the shit people call fanfic

Very sorry about the name, im new to this site and didn't know.

Great story, Can't wait for reinstated saviour.

Well done

Becca

Cool ending, bit of a rubbish twist.

Hi, Ok first let me say that was a suspenseful if not a bit short of a chapter. I liked it but there was a lot of confusion. I thought there should have been a few dividers to change the topic from Blunt to Alex. And you skipped a lot of time in between events in this chapter. Overall, I don't think this chapter is up to par with your others. I suggest revising it. Once you do that though, I'm sure it will make more sense. Other than that, I loved the chapter and hopefully the next one won't be as dissapointing to me as this one. I know you can do better since the other chapters are exellent. Anyway thanks for updating and can't wait for the next cahpter.

Miriah

Hey matty

i liked the story. How long will the final one story be?

he he funny ending. I was wondering where the humor was. great action. by the way Alex seems the type that thinks out his situation a little more then you are characterizing him to have done. but it is your story and you are doing a fantastic job so far. keep up the great work.

* Miriah *

oh!I really loved that chapter and thanks for the quick update. This story almost seems as if it is coming to an end. Will there be a sequel or another story you will write? I can't wait to find out who the hidden identity man is and what Alex will do to him if he gets the chance. Keep up the great work.

* Miriah *

Good so far.

Please Write more.

PS are you Anthony Horowitz in disguise?

PPS write more.

PS i said that already.

You are certainly right. That Cliffie annoyed me to no end! Why do you do that! ARUh Kool chapter. Quite a combination, Alex Rider and Alan Blunt working together. Can't wait for the next action-packed chapter.

* Miriah *

oh! you just had to leave us at a cliffie, didn't you? Great work on the chapters. I'm curious why Blunt and Jones smiled in satisfaction though? Of course then again mi6 is a bit twisted. keep up the great work and can't wait for the next chapter!

KOOL! Sabina appearing was a surprise! Alex seems to say "shit" a lot though! lol!

Write more!