Beautiful. There is a sleepy feel to reading this that makes me feel words are not required to express my delight and fondness for it, although I know that to not be true. I imagine that I will be reading this again, and soon. For it does not seem like it would diminish my enjoyment from repetition. Thank you for writing.

I loved the ending. That was, a really good promise.

The descriptions were beautiful. And I can understand about forgetting about being on a railing or something like that. I tend to do the same thing.

All in all a lovely piece.

That was sweet, in a horror/death/formal way. :D I enjoyed it, really.

By the way, what did the Latin phrase that Ryou said mean? (And am I even right in saying it's Latin?)

Okay, so obviously, your intelligence surpasses about 99.9 percent of the fanfiction population. I can just tell, with the words you use, sentence structure, particular allusions, and other things I'm far too lazy to list. But you get my point. Everything is fabulous.

Sugar-injected praise aside, my favorite part of this was when Ryou and Bakura met up for their kiss and both their thoughts were in conjunction with one another, thinking "this one is mine to keep" or something deliciously romantic like that. It was a little heart breaking how Bakura is so tormented by his past, and can't seem to get over it. And, it seems he's afraid to want Ryou's help. In the end though, he reconciles his feelings and gets the reassurance he needs when Ryou says he will be there for him.

Obviously, obviously, and obviously, I loved it.

The whole world on fire thing just has me wibbling with joy - I love that image and that line. And, you don't make Ryou simpering and Bakura ridiculously fandom like.

Ohh, I love it! This story is well written and absolutely heart wrenching! I hope that you post again soon! (Please!) I can't wait to see how they make their way now that all is lost. I hope Ryou can help Bakura be at peice.

Amazing and deep. I love it. :)

-Aithril-

Fate,this was one of the most heartfelt stories I've ever read with Ryou and Bakura in it. I feel really sorry for Ryou, losing his home, and almost losing his yami. Plus, what really happened to Bakura? Where was he?

touching yet realisticly stilted emotionally - i love the way you write these two.

beautiful and haunting. I like it.

...have I mentioned that I love your style? It is a welcome change from the Randome Japanese that is prevalant in this fandome

I'm always completely awed and amazed by your works. This is just...beautiful. Incredible. I'd say it leaves me speechless, but I'm speaking right now. Astonishing...this is just one of those stories that makes you -think-. Lovely!

Wow, just sensational, one of the best one-shots I've ever read! But...what is kevlar?

Love Sami

This was sad, but very interesting. I like the depth you added to both Ryou and Bakura, very good for a one-shot. Good luck with the contest thingy lol!

The *Queen Of Games*

That was kinda weird... but a sorta good kinda weird, I thought. Ehh, you probably think I'm strange, too, leaving a review like this. :p

dod...SUGOI! _