Man, you should really finish this. 1440 battlemechs?

Any chance of this being continued? Any story having to do with the discovery of 1,440 'Mechs just BEGS for more.

Its great. please continue it.

this is good stuff-any more of it?

Don't keep us waiting! Any story where someone finds 1440 mechs needs to be finished!

Well, it's certainly an interesting concept. I especially like the independent WarShip idea. ;) The setting is also pretty good.

Just... The writing seems like it could use some polish. Perhaps describe some of the scenes better, or work on transitioning better from scene to scene. Sometimes, I get the feeling like I'm jumping too far.

Other than that, it's interesting. I am certainly looking forward to see what happens next. ;)

Very nice start. Star League caches are always fun.

Very interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with this next.

~saerry