It's a simple story yet has meaningful moral message. Nice story from you again. Thank you :)

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GOD! i love your fic! GOODNESS! i like your concept! i hope that you can create a longer fic about asucaga

Thumbs up.

*I do want to put some more long sentences in this review box. But... ah... I'm just in disarray to do so. My brain's kinda slow, today ._."a*

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Lovely story, as for how you wrote it I didn't notice much of the flaws. I don't nitpick much on stories with good plots. I liked how they were very much in character and the pacing is really great, besides the plot, your pacing is one of the better things about this fic. Kudos!

hello!

Anyway... my review in here is not only for this chapter but for all!

so my comment is...

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LOVE IT SO MUCH!

accidently i read the 'coconut thrown by a monkey' first...

so, i search for its prequel...

so i found it!

GREAT!

even there's some miss grammar...(well not much)

but the story is great!

i'm waiting for u'r next story!

XD

anyway, nice to meet you~~ :D

Ackk, that was soo good..T_T

Wow!This is a bravo!

Two thumbs up! I like it!

hmm.. it's aLways Kira who seems to be the hero icon.. goOd thing it's Athrun's turn in the Lime Light in this fic..

Kira and CagaLLi are oLder than Athrun.. demo, in this fic.. Athrun's the one who's oLder.. so I'LL imagine Athrun in GSD then Kira and CagaLLi in GS.. _

erm.. Athrun with Long hair.. just enough Long to be tied into a ponytaiL.. and a beard, ne? hmm.. a navy bLue beard.. *giggLes*

oh.. so after Letting his squadron pLay bait for the JouLe's squadron.. he's the onLy survivor.. and he ends up bLind and crippLed, ne? are his eyes of that of SEED mode when his bLind? y'know.. no eye whites..

Kira and CagaLLi are adopted, ne? and CagaLLi's oLder than Kira, ne?

say, what course are CagaLLi and Lacus taking up? are they shrinks, aka psychoLogists or caregivers?

the part wherein Athrun teLLs CagaLLi that he's gLad that he has met her.. that scene reminded me of them in GS when they were about to have their first kisS.. kawaii deshou!

try reading "Truth" by puzzlepuzzle.. specificaLLy chap 28.. kinda Like making CagaLLi this time, to open her eyes.. and "Sad goOdbyes" by emeraldalchemist it ain't finish though.. it's sorta Like Athrun being bait.. *sighs*

nyWeiZ, sugoii fic! I'LL be reading "A Coconut Thrown by a Monkey" in a few.. .~

P.S. if you're an AsuCaga fan.. I encourage you to view this URL:

yeah, I know it sounds siLLy..

demo,

who knows?

that it might actuaLLy work..

jaa ne! ;p

I love the story...did you make a sequel for this one? If you did i'm glad..

OMG dont worry about the flame! this person flamed me really bad, and then they went on about how im so gothic and stuff just because my stories nad name mentions death! It happens, pplz! death happens! and ya, im not gothic, i just like to add a dramatic touch 2 my fics. this is kinda off topic...but ne ways awsome chapter! dont let it get u down! LUV THIS FIC AND THE SEQUEL!

OMG i loved it! Definitely one of my favourites! Keep up the good work!

Great work. ) A definitely interesting read.

wow...that was so sweet...i cant wait to read the sequel..well, i dun really hav to cuz im about to start it right after i finish reviewing GREAT FIC! ITS AWESOME!

aw...that was so sweet...really sweet...im now jus another chap n fic away, lol

AWESOME FIC! I LUV IT!

ps NO, u r NOT bad (as an author), as for the flame, i read it and think its stupid. -_- the person said that the characters dont act the way they do in the anime show, well duh! its called bein OUT OF CHARACTER (OOC). thats wat makes a fic interesting! ... ya ya, i kno, im spazzing...but it realy makes me upset, i dun write fics n i only read and review, but i really hate it wen ppl flame, 'if they dont lik the fic or sumthin, then why bother...*sigh* ill stop..srry, hehe GREAT CHAP!