What about visiting her family on earth hmmm? Give her little brother some piece of mind atleast.
Other than that tidbit I like what I am reading. Feels like another action adventure wud be taking place soon. End up with a make out session too perhaps.
LUV_ANGEL (offline reading)

Please continue or rewrite.

I like the story how it is at this time.

I do wish you would continue on with this story! I quite enjoy the events that unfolds :}. Please update if you can, thank you.

I "discovered" this story just this morning, and I haven't been able to tear my eyes away from it. I am not exaggerating at all when I say this - I nearly cried when the chapter ended because I knew there was no more. I didn't expect to fall so in love with this story. You see, I was just trying to pass time when I 'stumbled' on your story and I figured I'd just skim over the chapter to see if I'd actually want to read it 'cause I noticed the last update was posted a year ago and I usually try to keep myself away from stories that haven't been updated for awhile because I don't handle anticipation all too well. Once I'm sucked into a story, I have to admit... I get a little *cough* obsessive. I don't stop thinking of it, and depending on just how much I liked the story - that's how long it'll take for me to stop thinking about it so much. The problem right now is I love your story to bits. I'm afraid of how hard it'll be to stop thinking of it and the characters now. *Sigh* from you're author's notes, I could tell how busy you are and that last author's note scared the *cough* outta me. I would hope that you continue the story instead of rewriting it. I can see how you and some other readers may feel that the characters fell in love too fast, but I don't feel that way at all. Sure, their feelings for eachother developed faster than it could have (should you have decided to prolong it a little more) but they're definitely still working their way to developing their relationship with eachother. Actually, I think the pace you set is perfect for the story. If you had gone any slower, I think I (and probably tons of your other readers) would have gone insane! Even now, I'm pulling my hair waiting for them to finally get to that climatic moment, but patience is a virtue after all and I know the wait will make that moment so so so worth it. I love your writing. I didn't realize you started the story so long ago, no wonder I noticed how much more beautiful your writing became after each chapter. Hmm.. A bit mean of you actually cuz it only served to make me fall more in love with your story! I know you're busy and I don't want to be one of those pesky readers that rush you, but I would be the happiest girl in the world when the next chapter is posted. I do hope you haven't abandoned this story!

Anywhoo.. Thank you so much for sharing it with us! I think I may have to reread this entire story from the beginning to satisfy my growing obsession! Ha!

So what happens next?

Nooooo! Don't rewrite it! I love this story! Lol just start a new one! I love their lovey dovey romance. I definitely cried yesterday re-reading the parts in the kitchen and then when Inuyasha got hurt. Please leave it how it is! It is an amazing story and their love makes it easier to fall into the fantasy of the world. My boyfriend and I are having problems right now but this story made me feel better because although it is rarely true for anyone it makes me believe that true love is something that can be attained by a lucky few. I understand their instant love makes you feel as if your writing was younger but it truly helps others with their lives. Maybe you could weave Kagome's past into later chapters, but I honestly would be sad if it were rewritten. I have loved this story so much and would be sad to see the story I have re-read so many times go away. I would actually like to see more of Inuyasha and Kagome's love. They are positively the cutest couple ever and I want them to admit it to each other. It would help her face her fears and the rest of her transformation if there was someone to understand her. That is how I feel but of course whichever you decide to do I'll read it. I love you onee!

-Akemi

(Kate)

Ahhhh! I loved it and I have missed this story! I have been procrastinating to catch up! I re-read the whole thing last night and today so I can get to these two new chapters! Onee you better update soon! I haven't talked to you in forever! I miss you! And if you ever need me to proofread a chapter I would be happy to :) Some of your words are switched up a bit like peace and piece etc. I am glad to help! Email me! we need to catch up!

-Akemi

(Kate)

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It seems like a good story, but maybe you should unbold the first chapter. It takes away from the story.. And well, the first chapter is what draws people in. :) I don't know if you noticed the bolded text.

PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY!

I LOVE READING IT!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

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Hello! I would love to sign in and make this a "signed" review but I have not logged in in so long that I have forgotten my password and I am too lazy to retrieve it right now. Anyway; I apologize for not reading or reviewing this story sooner. I have been away from the IY scene for a while and am just now venturing back. I was actually trying to check up on stories I stopped reading about a year ago and came across this one. You fit all of my criteria ( good grammar, Kag/Inu pairing, more than 1,000 words per chapter, and an interesting plot line with the prospect for lemons) so I checked this little beauty out. Personally I feel the story is going very well as is; the relationships are believable and you give just enough to taunt and leave us wanting so that we continue reading. I hope you have them give in soon though because I'm starting to go crazy. I will also defend how it is possible to fall in love quickly when it is the right person. I originally did not want my BF but was convinced to try one date after several long talks with him and encouragement from my sister. I was a virign when we started dating but I KNEW after just 2 weeks that he was the right person for me, I still made him wait 6 months though, and we've now been together for almost 3 years. So those people that say love cannot happen that fast just haven't had the experience. So I vote that you leave it as is and continue. The only thing that does bother me is that Inu seems to be portrayed as being very weak; I would really appreciate it if he actually got to kick someone's ass instead of having his handed to him all the time. I'm all for the strong woman thing but I do also love a man who can kick some butt and take names, its very sexy! . so that is my two cents, take it or leave it but please update soon.

I love this story! It's one of my all time favorites. I can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S. Just to let you know this is one of the stories that I will drop everything for if there is an update)

Hey!

So I really don't know what to say. In a way I would like for you to continue the story the way it is, because I'm already familiar with the the plot line (though to be honest I had to re-read the whole thing to remember what it was all about) and also because if you rewrite the whole thing... well let's just say that I understand the whole pre-med college experience and I don't know if you will have the time to rewrite it the way you want it. And it might never end?

To be honest, whether you continue or you rewrite it I will try to continue reading it.

Thanks a lot for updating! I hope to read from you soon lol. :)

i will admit it is a very beautiful story but i which it hadnt otaken so long to continue the story but any how it is good to have you back and continue this amazing fanfic

i am loving it continue