*stares at screen in open-mouthed shock and awe* so short, and yet so powerful ... wow.

Yeah, I know what you mean! As soon as Dark was sealed away Daisuke spent about three seconds mourning for him then went straight to Riku. Wow, "brothers" and "best friends" indeed... I hated the ending to the anime. They should have waited for the manga instead of trying to finish it early. I love what you've written, and I can't wait for the next part of Phantom Destiny, it's going really well! Good luck!

Oh, I'm not one for fanfiction poetry as a general rule, but this is perfect. It really captures the sadness to it that nobody really seemed to care about Dark, not REALLY...it's on my faves.

You are right! when people right fanfics they make Drk sarcastic, but they never seem to put a fragile more delicate side of him. I think alot through the meaning of the poem, Riku especially if she exists should read this.

Beautiful and very insightful. Excellent job.

He sealed himself away? That's a spoiler. your poem was great and very expresive. Hope to read some more soon.

I think this is simply beautiful. You say you have no flair for fiction, but I disagree. You've really captured some of the mysterious essence that is Dark. I've tried to write about this guy, and have failed miserably so I really do appreciate your poetry.

The title is amazing too, by the way! "untouchable book hero." It's beautifully strung together. You really have a way with words.

And the picture you're referring to suddenly does look tragic after reading your poem...

So please, for the sake of DNAngel fandom, write!

... poor Dark... a bit of a martyr from this perspective, but the only type of sacrifice that can truly be heroic; the ones no one knows about. Anyway, I liked this.

This is great! Nice poem. I don't think no one would of thought of that! It's fantastic! The only thing I don't get is the title.