| Reviews for Forbidden Hearts |
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Ana Maria chapter 13 . 8/13/2018 I'm writing with a google translator. I love your version of my favorite story, just perfect. |
ShortySC22 chapter 13 . 11/6/2013 I just read this story and love how you incorporated everyone into this lovely Cinderella story. |
I'll Break Your Heart chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 Love it! Sorato fanfic at its best! |
puasluoma chapter 13 . 12/27/2009 Such a nice story! Congrats! |
Yumi14 chapter 13 . 9/5/2009 This story is AMAZING.I love it!Sorato moments are sweet too. 3 |
Twilight Phantom Dragon chapter 13 . 4/25/2009 Whew, all 13 chapters in one amazing sitting! Rather than type out seperate reviews for each chapter, I think I'll just make one larger review. I couldn't pull away to write a short review for each chapter anyway. I'll start by saying that I loved the ways you portrayed every character in this story. Mimi in her role as the fairy god-sister was very entertaining and I'm glad that you chose to incorporate her into the story. I never really liked Miyako much, so I enjoyed seeing her in the villian role. She was a character that I loved to hate. She was a wonderfully written character, and I enjoyed reading the scenes when she was angry though I always felt sorry for whoever she happened to be torturing. I ended up cheering when Sora stood up to her and when she was finally sent to the dungeons. Yamato and Sora's romance was refreshing and also well-written. I enjoyed their conversations and I found myself laughing a few times at their flirting. I agree, Yamato is such a charmer. Overall, I loved this story. It was well-wrtten with charming dialogue and lovable characters. Brilliant job! |
HEr-NAMe-Is-DIVa chapter 13 . 2/9/2009 Hi there! So, yeah, I just read this entire piece in one go (that's right, all 13 chapters, haha!). Honestly have to say, it's splendidly written - so wish I could write this well. Alas I have some ways to go; wish me luck! XD Back to the review, your story was well paced and I like the way you described things (actually took the time to re-read certain paragraphs just to admire a few wittily-phrased sentences XP). 'Cinderella' is probably my favorite princess-tale of all time too (seriously, one will faint if they knew how many times I actually rewound my old tape player with the specific Disney movie inside since my early childhood!), which is what initially drew me to giving this piece a go~ Totally love the characters and their personalities, especially the leads of course as they are one of my fav Digimon pairings. Overall, I guess I enjoyed Mimi's character the most, mainly due to the role she played as 'fairy godsister' (it was just the most amusing~ XD). I mean, the 'fairy godmother' thing really had me perplexed when I read the first couple of chapters and got me wildly curious how you'd incorporate it if at all. Truly satisfied with the final result, heh _ Shall also gladly add that I'm hardly fond of Miyako (Yolei, as I prefer - brainwashed by the English dubs) too. It felt good to see her playing the (substitute the 'w' with 'b' if you feel up to it) 'witch-ie' role she did here; though I'm pretty sure I'll never tackle an attempt to make her seem so horrible in a story my self - darn me, I'm too goody-goody! XP I have to say my favorite parts were pretty much the last few chapters from when Mimi materialized into being, haha! I've never exactly been a Mimi fan to begin with but I think I quite like her a lot better now, heh, thanks! _ Lastly, I know this is practically an essay but I doubt I'd be able to forgive my self if I posted a shorter (half-hearted) review in its place. Perhaps consider it as 13 separate reviews so it doesn't seem as long? Once more, great story. And personally, someone ought to make this version into a movie or something. Haha, if I ever get my dream director's chair...*sighs* Well, I've ranted on enough (as usual). Anyways, now that I finally have some time, this here Diva shall proceed to read your other works. Take care! XD |
Ruby chapter 13 . 12/27/2007 wow. datz the best cindrella-ish story i hav ever read! i like how u describe the chrcter's 'beautiful' features! lol did i mention i like ur writing style! very refreshing~ n i like th humor n fluff to it! u shuld add more makeout scenes ;p jk. ur'e v talented n u shuld keep up writing! *srry if i'm makin a fool out of myself XD* i re-watched th series n juz hadto read th sorato fics tht u wrote! :D |
Dreyar is my married name chapter 13 . 12/12/2007 Love It:) Great Job |
kimee chapter 13 . 11/18/2007 this was a wonderful story. i loved how you added a modern touch XD now i feel like going off to watch my old cinderella video lol |
DJizcool chapter 1 . 9/5/2007 Wow, I thought I'd reviewed this story before to tell you how much I loved it. That was AGES ago...After about two years, I've read it ALL again, and it's still absolutely amazing. I congratulate you! ~Jenny |
DanceOfTheEntWives chapter 13 . 7/7/2007 whohoo, that was so great! i'f seen "ever after" it's one of my favorite movies. and i'f seen ella enchanted but can't compare with the book since i haven't read that, but i take it what you've said is true and that it's better than the movie. it was the same with eragon. so he story was so cool (all you're reviewers are probably saying that) wow you've got 3 reviews! how the hell do you do that (well obvious by writing so good, sorry stupid question) well i'll leave you now. bu-baai PS SORATO ROCKS! PS2 sorry just wanted to mention that :-p |
imperfectandchaotic chapter 13 . 5/29/2007 I'd tell you how awesome your story is, but judging by the number of reviews, I think you already know. Keep it up while I check out your other stories! Annie |
Black Licorice Addict chapter 13 . 1/19/2007 Loved the story :) Some of the sentences were a bit confusing, but overall it was pretty magical. |