Rereading this for like more than 10 times now always bring the same emotions and love for the characters. It's one of the best distraction during this time of pandemic. Hope to hear again from you soon. Stay safe and God bless!

-Melanie

I came across this story again after years of not coming to this website. I had forgotten that I had looked at your writing before you had published it. I couldn't log into my old account, so I had to create a brand new one to make my comeback, haha. I loved this story back when I first came across it and I still love it now.

Lay Hime 3

Hola Isis, tu manera de atender los detalles es atractiva y cómo haz creado los entornos y personajes necesarios para cubrir los espacios en la historia, además de cómo le diste un secuencia cómoda para leer a toda la historia. Fue muy divertido, gracias. Me voy a Quatre y Dorothy :)

I love this! You just made me adore Dorothy and Quatre! They have so much potential! And your approach to Heero's behavior is outstanding, even though he looks and acts like a machine, he's just a big softie that needs to learn more about 'normal' interactions between teenagers/young adults. It's really interesting to have his insight on different things and his own emotions, the road to his self-discovery is quite a delight, a real feast. Now I'll go see what other goodies you have written :3 thank you!

I keep reading this and all your Gundam Wing Stories

so I am rereading this for the millionth time and I don't think I have ever left a review so here goes. in this chapter alone, you managed to capture both HeeroRelena so well. I just love how natural it seemed. Even though we are given little snippets of what happens after Endless Waltz, this was a beautiful edition to what happened in between.

Thank you soooooo much for writing this amazing work!

Love love love love it, I just spent 2 hours today on the phone with my sister telling her about it,
As far as I can tell you're the only person I read so far for- and girl I read A LOT- that captured real Heero's actions and emotions in regards to Relena..
Thank you, you made me soo happy and energized and depressionless while reading..

It was really appealing, I absolutely adored Dorothy and Quatre, Duo is amazing as usual, Zechs too,
The new team is kinda fun, especially the whole plot about keeping the past hidden from them..

I liked the plots so much, it was fast moving, and kept me on edge and never bored, the description words were perfect not tooo long as you might find there,
It's just so good, I am so lucky to be able to read it all at once, I am now heading for the sequel ofcourse
I made the story a fav so after years from now and when the time comes I can still come and find comfort and happiness in it
You are truly amazing, thanks for all the laughter I had and all the happiness positive mood things I got..

Until later

Duo is spot on.

Love the Noin/Zechs portrayal.

You seriously get into the heads and hearts of these characters. It's like a backstage, all-access pass.
I have never seen someone delve so deep into their emotions and you portrayed it in a believable way.

I equally really enjoyed how you write Dorothy and Quatre.

THIS WAS GREAT BECAUSE YOU JUST WROTE A SYNOPSIS FOR HEERO AND RELENA. #LoveIt
*Heero Yuy… mass destructive, mass murdering, potential kamikaze, inhumanly skilled Gundam pilot, and world savior by the age of fifteen. And Relena Darlian/Peacecraft… average schoolgirl turned pacifism Princess, turned Queen of the World, turned official politician by the same age.*

The way you explain WHY Heero finally stays with her is brilliant. Makes complete sense and totally could happen that way.

Bravo!

this is by far... well for me at least the most awesome fic ive read. not only did you give justice to all the characters involved but, you also gave your readers one heck of a ride when it comes to your characters emotions. i am hooked. and i cant wait for you to send another chapter up on Revelations. you are aweeesoooomeeee

Reading this story has been a great time and has kept me up way past my bedtime many nights. I was so sad to reach the final chapter, but then… the sequel Realizations has 34 chapters of goodness waiting for me! (Thank you so much for that!)

I think you have done an outstanding job of writing a story that is intriguing and keeps the characters in character. Also it's not too sappy or cheesy. Seriously the best fanfic I have ever read.

Even though this story was written 10 years ago, I hope you will write something new soon. As we age we can see the world in a different way, so I wonder how your writing will have changed in that time.

I'm really feeling this story so far. 3

I was gonna say something good about the ending, but that omake really threw me. Ahahahaha. OOC or just behind-the-scenes? It's a bit fuzzy, and either way... pretty much, yes.

This was an excellent read. I'm not normally one for romance, but I might take a gander at your followup fics regardless. You certainly did the characters no injustice in this one!

(Oh. Except Trowa. I did miss dear Trowa, although I agree that there wasn't really any sensible way to fit him into the storyline. Props for making the one reference to his contributions a pun. : hahaha)

I am recommending this to all my (fandom-savvy) friends.

"Heero eyed him vaguely before scooting his laptop over a few inches, managing to block his slumped form completely from his line of vision." It's lines like THAT that bring this story life. Ahahahaha! It's too real.

And I've had an inkling that it would probably end up being Duo to blow their cover. Hell, he's not even supposed to be here. XD

(I had to pause and get my head out of the mental imagery for a breather when you had him and Heero leaning back against the windows. I mean, yeah, they're probably meters thick quintuple-paned and obviously well-sealed, but...brrrr. I am not a space-goer. Nope nope nope.)

It's kind of making me chuckle at how just a few little changes can shoot both of them into hyperanalytical overdrive. I think everyone probably does something similar when they have an emotional puzzle to solve, but it can only be worse for those with more of a natural bent for precalculation.

I like all your visual/tangible details when you're writing a lengthy internal process like this. The cold metal wall. The sounds of Duo shifting awake. Relena wrapped in blankets. (Fuwafuwa :D) I find myself being really sucked into the moment.
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"Snore and you sleep alone" - truth. I'm remembering that one. Hahaha.

I was kinda on the fence about 2xD before this fic.

No longer. (here, hold my feels)