Can't wait for more!

I can't believe I've never reviewed this story. I've read it tons of times and loved it each time. It even inspired me to write my own Die Hard fic, which I'll post as soon as I finish. (With Hans and Simon being the main characters, of course. ;))

Anyway, I don't know if you still read these reviews at all, but I wanted you to know that you've brought a little sunshine to my life with your story. After all, isn't that what all us writers strive for? :)

Thanks!
Tari

I love this story! *swoons*

This was fantastic! I was so enthralled. It was great to read a story about Hans Gruber, cool adding Simon in the mix too. It was well thought out, the story was terrific. Overall... A! LOVED this so much. You need to do more for Hans Gruber!

I have to ask... is Adelaide supposed to be the mother of Piet Gruber from Die Hard: Vendetta?

Scarface came out in 1983.

awesome story i loved it! :D

hey! great story! this will definately go under my favorites! i've written a fan fic myself and i'm working on my second one right now. well anywayz! keep it up the good work!

I liked your introduction of Simon into the story, but I feel that Hans is to out of character (as compared to the movie) and that you rushed the relationship between Adelaine and Hans. I felt that he cared too much for her, when he seems strictly professional in the movie. Guess it's just wishful thinking that he'd be like that? :D

The riddle part was creative, but I'd think that Hans would've known the answer, being so witty and clever *fangirl grin*. And so far, I haven't seen a reason that your character has that key...

Overall though, great story and flawless grammar! (and my somewhat harsh review isn't because I want Alan Rickman all to myself. Really! _;; *cough*) This plot dragged me in, I love your writing style, and you make good summaries. )

Hi!

I really liked and enjoyed your story!

I'd immediately change to the terrorists side, if Hans would have asked me to!

*smiling absent-mindly*

Well, anyway...I don't think your chapters were too short because there was so much happening in each one of them.

Keep writing like that !

Morgaine

P.S. I'm German and if you should ever think about writing another Die Hard story, I'd really like to help you with the translations and stuff... Just email me !

-Morgaine

(sorry for any grammar mistakes :)

OMG!

HANS!

*clings to hans* i WISH i owned HANS! OMG YOU HAVE NO IDEA!

anyway, getting back to the story, it was really good! i don't think hans would be such a softy, though and all lovey and protective but that's only minor.

i've started my own die hard fan fiction thingy too so look out for that xP

*drags a perplexed hans away* he's mine O_O MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

It was a really good story, although being a fan of die hard and Alan rickman who plays Hans Gruber in the movie.I could not really imaging Hans Gruber speaking like he did, or being such a softy,. Hans Gruber is fierce and would never get with a girl whilst on the job. Although it would be good viewing because alan rickman is so damn hot! Very good stroy line, im wondering how old you are because the grammer and spelling was fantastic. You should be proud!

Wow, that was really quite fab! Are you going to write more about their next adventures?

;o)

P.S. I wish I owned Hans too... and Simon for that matter...

This is great! Hope to see you writing more stuff like this soon.

I loved the ending. You need to write another story. I loved every single chapter. Good job.