Reviews for Homeland, My Homeland
moi chapter 11 . 4/6/2005
um. a mix between WW2. very interesting. write more. look forward to see more characters interaction
Terra Fire chapter 9 . 4/2/2005
Great chapter, as with the ones before it. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I have a lot on my plate. This is a great fic, as I said before I like how you changed history in a history that doesn't even exist.

I wonder if Dearka and Miriallia will meet. I also can't help but wonder what Miriallia has to do with anything, and what the old man's secret is. Will it break the peace that has befallen on earth and bring about another war?

Anyway, enough of my mindless rambilings. I hope you can update soon.

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~VGT~
moi chapter 8 . 3/24/2005
interesting development. would suggest you work on the characterisation of the characters. the emotion of the characters, action etc. these set the atmosphere of the story.

will the old characters take main roles? (anyone reading fanfic would be naturally be curious who old characters interact with other people)

yeah, do update, btw i hope you will not take this as a flame.
Terra Fire chapter 6 . 3/16/2005
Another grate fic. This time you did an alternet history fic with a made up history. I really like how you did this, and I can't wait for you to update.

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~VGT~
Moments of insanity chapter 6 . 3/1/2005
man, i'm really tempted to ask u to write faster (haha did already), but than good writing can't be rushed, i'll just have to wait. the mystery is mounting and it seems like mili been dragged into the middle of it. i'm looking forward to see other original characters in it, especially the natural people, ie cagalli as a representative of orb. a little more background on the tension between the co-ordinator and natural will be quite nice. do update soon
bsdisaster chapter 4 . 2/8/2005
Really interesting story so far. Though I have to admit that I haven't read "Fatherland".

Your time-/ storyline seems very ralistic.

Good job.
Moments of Insanity chapter 2 . 1/22/2005
interesting. please do continue. will you introduce other characters? btw. u might want to accept unsigned review so that more people will review this.
BLACKANGEL32076 chapter 2 . 1/22/2005
Very interesting. It looks like you've made and AU Gundam SEED fanfic based on the Alterate History fiction book Fatherland. Very interesting indeed. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see where this fanfic goes next.