Damn. Ace, I hadn't read this one before. I shouldn't have read it at work, either. Cuz now I'm sitting here all teary-eyed and trying to keep it together while a meeting happens in the conference room next to my office. Thanks for not stopping all your Iman writing. You have the knack. And give your Hobbesy a hug for me.

Suz

Damn.
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Krys

I read this story a while ago, but till now I hadn't had a chance to add it to my favorites

This is actually the only story I've written a review for. This one hit me close and hard so I just had to let you know that.

This story was wonderfully written. It just flows. Physical descriptions about movements, stances, all of it is worded so nicely.

But the best part is the actual story. You can almost feel what Fawkes is feeling even if you've never experienced feeling depressed, guilty, and almost suicidal but not quite ready.

You are a wonderful writer. Keep it up.

dumb me...i didn't say anything. this was a great story (despite my silence). the emotions were real and that's what makes it good.

Ok this was good. I remember feeling that way. You nailed it good.

Great fanfic.

Very good! I'm not an avid Invisible Man watcher, but it seemed to be in keeping with the characters. Good work! By the way, what's with obHo! 8\10

This is very dark...powerful emotions to this. I liked it because of that. It hurts to read in some ways. The emotions though come across as honest, real. About the way you'd expect someone to feel in this situation. Nicely done.

Umm...wow. Can't think of anything else to say.

Excellent story. You really got both the characters' voices and personalities really well. I could imagine this working as an episode. I've always thought that Darien could easily become depressive and suicidal, with everything that has happened to him. Thanks for a good read.

You are SO wrong, Aces. This story ROCKED! Very true to the character's natures, very realistic, and your grammer was perfect. Don't doubt your writing. It's great. Please write more stories...it'd be a shame if you didn't!

Ooh, that was... dark... but good... ve-ry good... Don't stop writing!

You did an excellent job on this story! A very tough subject that was handled in a touching and very caring manner. Bobby Hobbes never bails on his partner.

Its a true testament that everyone needs someone they can talk to and confide in. And don't ever let the depression win!

And I hope your writing this helped your depression.

Very nicely written, but I found it wasn't quite as depressing as you made it out to be _~ and you DID do a good job of staying in-character on Darien. Much better than my work in progress. Totally OOC Arnaud on that one _;; Sort of an abrupt ending, but like I said, excellently written and you did an awesome job of describing the emotions one has when someone's died. I look forward to more from you.

Salute to you!

-Andi