Reviews for Keeping Watch
Miss Nox chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Yay, I really like it- sorry if that's not imaginative, but i am on an AlbelxFayt reading spree and the love and threats just keep coming!
Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
LOL. I was totally floored. I was completely not expecting that as an ending. xD

-Moshi Moshi Mai
Naux chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Nice fic! I loved it! XD Especially the ending...Hehe
Alzemu chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
...

(reaction through out the story)

1st. hmm...nice details..i think i like it.

2nd. good way of portrating albel's character...

last. ...WHAT?~~!

now. HUH?SEXY?
NekuYasha chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
That was just too good! I would love to see this go further! Grammer and Spelling are very good, story flow is great and and the descriptive 'feel' is wonderful! I really felt like I could 'see' what was going on. Great job!
Rotharell Jenova chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Very funny. You should add some chapters.
Dark Azure Wind chapter 1 . 4/9/2005
Much to fun! I guess toying with Fayt's mind would be fun!
Lyrah chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
OMG it cant end like that! ::must have more AlbelxFayt!:: lol i love tha fic, itz awesome, ya gotta add more
toytoy chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
I likey very! Bring on the next poece allreay ;)
leoth chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
LMAO!
Silver-Star677 chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
This is really good. I like it. Make Albel kill him! That be funny..In someway I supose..

Oh well, Keep at it!

**hands you a cookie**
InfectiousPsychosis chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
*random purring* M cliffhanger...I'm going to eat it...So that you can...Possibly write more? ...No...You WILL write more. *eyes suspiciously* You must write moree...*hypnotisish tone of voice* You will write more...*falls over sleeping* Z...

Saruka: ...By all things holy, she needs to work on that...*grabs Aoki's body and drags her off* You've got a nice story going on there!
illsprawl chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Not only is this completely in-character...it's adorable! I absolutely loved it, and I insist that you write more SO3 fic now. Please.
Albel-The-Wicked66613 chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Goddess of Oblivion Please tell me that you are not going to leave that as a cliff hanger or i'm going to scream. That was rather good how you made Fayt go in and out of his daydream like mind.

I don't realy know if you are going to write another peice or if you are going to leave it like it already is but if you are here's an option you can use. Try making Albel now see fayt as fayt see's him yet make Albel act normal and try to hide it.

Don't get me wrong i wouldn't want you to think that i am actually telling you to do this. Heck i dont know if im supposed to be doing this but i heard it can help. Just a suggestion.

I guess i'm realy desperate for another part for this story arn't I.

You are a good writter for cliff hangers and stuff i think its called suspence. What ever it is keep the ball rolling because this is a realy good story.

(would understand if you have college or school because work is evil. or if you have workthats evil too.)

keep writting
Neko chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Ha ha! that was great you have to write more!
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