Reviews for Prediction of the Pink
BettyeK chapter 55 . 1/7/2017
I can't remember if I reviewed the last time... but this chapter had me tearing up. I shed tears as Apollyon left the group to join Manchu. I am hoping there will be more story. It's been so very long since we had a new chapter. I realize that you probably have a very busy life going on but this story is EPIC. Thanks again for what you've written. You are appreciated.
RiverSakina chapter 57 . 3/25/2015
*Keeps poking with a stick, stirring up dust*
The Warrior Of LOVE chapter 57 . 11/29/2013
Hewo Starsabove0oru-chan it's been awhile since you last updated, I hope your well. I love ur story.. Obviously. Heh Many of us reviewers waiting for you to update, It has been 3 years. Please update soon cuz we really want to know what happens next
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yours,
100th follower Ü
Guest chapter 57 . 6/27/2013
please update
Guest chapter 50 . 6/26/2013
poor shuichi
Guest chapter 48 . 6/25/2013
shuichi had a baby in this story?! man i did not see that coming at all!
RiverSakina chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
*Pokes with a stick* Oiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. Wake up!
Loveless19 chapter 57 . 4/12/2013
I can't wait for your next update. I started reading this story way back in the beginning when you started publishing it. I recently decided to pick back up where I left off and I am so glad i did. I hope you are still planning to update the story again. I know it has been over 3 years since you have done so, but I hope you still have chapters hidden away somewhere. 3
riverraiden chapter 57 . 12/27/2012
Whoa... Man, now I really want to see more! I'm going to have to put this on my alerts. But hey, I wonder just how well Yuki's going to take it once he realizes what's going on outside his home. Hehehe, I can just imagine the look on Mika's face when Yuki comes...
KuroHinata chapter 57 . 6/14/2012
i really like this story. thanks for sharing. pls any update? or when can you update this story.
BettyeK chapter 57 . 10/23/2011
*ahem* Hi there Sutzina Zion...

I humbly submit this review in the hopes of gently reminding you of the EPIC story that has all of us awaiting its awesome continuation. This is probably THE BEST Eiri and Shuichi story I have EVER read... and I've read a lot! I love those boys! Muchly! I am completely sure that you are busy doing other things in life and that this story is not number one on your list of priorities... but it is one that I think deserves an ending.

The descriptions are awesome. The battle scenes are fantastic... (and leaving it just when we were going to see Mika fight with Shuichi was very suspenseful~ *blushes* Is that a word?) This is actually my second time reading this within a two week period. I didn't leave a review at first... and I do regret that, but I decided to take a chance and hope that you receive this to give you feedback and let you know that we are missing you.

The way that you have pulled me into the realms has completely left me anticipating everything. I am anxiously awaiting the reunion of Yuki and Shuichi; the reunion of Saki and Michael; and we STILL have no idea what exactly K and Judy have thought about their brilliant little boy. Let me not forget the betrayal of Apollyon and the disappearance of Suzu... plus the fact that the Archangel Michael is actually her father (did I get that right?). There is just soooo much left to be written... and I would love to see it. I'm sure your other fans are just as anxious as well. It has been a year... and again, I appreciate the fact that you are busy, but this really is something that should be finished... *sobs* PLEASE?

I guess I will leave this off here. I hope that you haven't left us completely... But I want to say thank you so much for sharing the vision that you had when writing this story.

Hopeful but understanding... BettyeK
sayuri-girl chapter 57 . 10/3/2011
I am back ... I have been away from FanFiction lately but I came back to this awesome story ... really you never cease to impress and surprise me with this story

I was so very very sad to see Apollyon desert them and choose to stand by Manchu ... that was a low blow from him to Shuichi ... and what the hell is wrong with Mika? why is she so against Shuichi and wants to kill him? I mean I understood why she would have something against Seki, but Shuichi didn't do anything to her ...

and where is Lord Lucifer? I am sure he wouldn't just let Mika kill him just because she wants it ... I mean really he is supposed to be the Lord of Hell and know everything that happens in his realm and therefore he should be there to stop her and let Shuichi go to his mother ... this isn't any more testing from the Angels ... unless beating Mika in a fight would actually make her understand that he deserves Yuki's love and make her give them her "blessing"

nonetheless, a wonderful story and I can't wait to read the next chapter ... which I hope will be soon cause I am very curious to see what will happen next, how Shuichi will beat Mika and if he would remember his life and then go back to the Demon Realm and see Yuki again ... hmmm I am sure I blabbered enough so I bid you adieu for now ;)

~sayuri~
q.q chapter 57 . 7/28/2011
New chapter before the year anaversy of chapter 42 please D:
L and misa for eternity chapter 57 . 5/6/2011
i love your storie its so well writen your doing a great job on it i hope theres more soon i gotta know what happened next
LoveHiei-Rine chapter 57 . 3/13/2011
Wow! Good. really good. It does seem a bit rushed, but all in all good. It is kinda confusing during Shuichi's dream with some stuff being italicized and other parts not, but really good. I hope that Shuichi remembers his past soon.

Also, I knew that Riku sounded familiar but it wasn't until Tiril started saying 'Ohmygod' that it dawned on me what you were going to do. Nicely played.

Also, I'm kinda confused as to Mika's second line about father's day. What does that have to do with anything?

Besides all that, I loved the chapter, Hope that you get Part 2 out soon because it has been awhile since you updated.
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