Awesome story!

SKYWALKER?! VERY nice twist!

I get increasingly impressed by your skill with each new story I read. Bloody fantastic! Well, there are others to move onto so I had best get cracking.

This is a really great piece of work. And making Revan the possible progenitor of the Skywalker clan ... the possibilities are mind blowing. Hope to read more from you soon.

This was the last of your KotOR works which I have read. If it was up to me, I would make these stories official. All of them are superb!

*is once again in awe of your ridiculous skills* I am at a loss for words. Your stories always do that to me! Such good writing...I can't even think properly to organize a good review. Eh...well, from my other longer one, you get how I feel when I read your stuff. Great job, once again, and keep it up!

What can I say? Fantastic story. :D

You're such a talented writer, I would love it if you wrote a story about Canderous - in your other stories, you always depicted him perfectly, and he's my favorite KOTOR character of all. ::pleading look::

I really like the idea that Revan worked on the Mandalorian relief effort with the refugees of the worlds that the Mandalorians attacked...

Revan's exasperation with the Jedi Council is well illustrated and rather sympathetic, especially with their continued blindness as to the seriousness of the situation, and their unwillingness to risk their necks for a few non-republic worlds. Rather typical of the Order to place itself over a couple of planets.

Anyway, nice work and I can't wait to see the epilogue.

A good story, as usual. I liked the explanation for the orphan status especially.

It sad that Revan fell, and pulled Malak with him. I'm dissapointed that Bastila didn't make an appearence, I could see a few places where she could have at least been mentioned. Oh well, it was a great fic. I can't wait to read mmore of your fics.

Oh, I love Vrook's prediction. Poor Rev, cast from the Order. Thankfully, we all know how it turns out.

“Well,” he observed calmly, “there’s only one way to find out…”

Ah, perfect Revan. Can we hope for more from you in the near future?

"Remember Exar Kun? Thirty Years ago? That's how this will turn out."

Bitter, aren't we, Vrook? Like, really freaking scary bitter.

I love this story, you are an excellent writer.

Another chapter? Yay! And an epilogue to come...you're spoiling us! Anyhoo...very, um, characteristic of your Revan, here. His motivations for going off seem nicely...mixed. Personal and practical, good and bad...just like it is in real life. Great stuff.

This is still one of the best Revan prequels I have read. Good job on the characterization of Malak and also actually giving Revan motive and time to make his decision to go against the Mandalorians. Keep it up!