Omg THAT WAS THE MOST ADORABLE THING I HAVE READ IN MY ENTIRE EXISTANCE

Completely unrealistic, the characters do not behave the way they should, and secondly when introducing Fable, you mad a complete mistake. I mean snape loves/loved lily Evans, haven’t u heard of ‘Always’ . I believe that fable would have been much more worthy if she had some similar interests fathers than the whole opposites attract cliche. All in all, one of the worst fanfics I’ve read about Harry Potter.

what do blueberries smell like?

ummmm u do realise Severus is half blood right?

THAT'S MY NAME! HOLY SCHIST THE D.A.D TEACHER HAS MY NAME!

Omg there had better be a sequel to the sequel! I want more details about how Dominic and Sirius are as a couple!

I thought you should know that Wattpad user "Devin" ( user/drarrycommunity) has posted this story as their own work. story/58718387-the-tale-of-a-dragon-drarry

I can't report them since I"m not the author (sigh, Wattpad reporting rules are stupid). Just thought you might want to know.

some very unexpected twists in Harry's life :)

First of all, get a beta! Even the best stories turn out almost poor when written with so many mistakes...
Secondly, I don't really get why this fic has so many favs. I know it has a sequel but it still seemed terribly unfinished, like nothing really happened. But that I could still overlook. What was worse was that I seriously missed any sense of reality. I mean almost everybody in the story is unreasonable and inconsistent.
Don't feel too bad, I just thought I had to say it since everybody else seems to not see it. You can be a better writer if you keep that in mind.

That was a great fanfition!
Could you please write another one with Draco and Harry in a relationship?
Thankssss :D :D :D
Byeeeee

That was a brilliant story :D Very well written. :3

oh poor Draco.

I would like to point out that you spelt 'whether' wrong. You left out the 'h'

Good chapter -although I honestly think that Snape -of all people -would have known the difference between a shielding/protection charm compared to actually firing a curse.

You made a little mistake when Ginny was mocking draco. You used 'he' instead of 'she'. Otherwise a good chapter.

Hi so i've just started reading this story, the plot line is interesting but i'm sort of confused with how you're writing it. First: i thought Draco would be more worried about becoming a werewolf, i would have thought he'd tell snape or something to try and fix it even though it cant be done. becoming a werewolf is life changing and the way you've written draco's reaction just doesn't really show that.

Second: I'm confused about Lupin...maybe i just missed it in the first few chapters but was he always at hogwarts? and i didn't really understand the whole interaction between animagus draco and lupin...was draco asking for help? if he was i thought it would have been great to show them interacting together and lupin guiding draco through this change.

Third: what is with draco spending his time to become an animagus? shouldn't his first concern be that he is now a werewolf?

I sincerely intend this review to be constructive criticism and not just dissing your story but it just doesnt really flow or make sense to me. I will keep reading it as i want to see how it turns out but yeah, this is how i feel about it at this point in the story.