Reviews for Life Is Not Always Fair
unknown chapter 6 . 1/4/2014
Really great story but need to make it longer with more chapters.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
I "no longer" want ANYTHING to do with dis story
Guest chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
UMmmmm...just one prob They fell in love WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY to fast
but any way GREAT JOB! :)
My Hero Academiafan 27 chapter 6 . 1/17/2010
So what happens next?
Lady Niona chapter 6 . 10/21/2007
plz update and i have a question..does Sesshomaru, Kagura, and Rin have rooms at the house that Inuyasha and Kagome are living at? And are the gonna use them?
Yasha-girl chapter 6 . 7/13/2006
definatly interesting! hahahaha kagome is so dirty minded!

lol please up-date soon!
Yasha-girl chapter 2 . 7/12/2006
Hahaha! Inuyasha singing to kagome! that was too damn

funny lolol.

anyways i really like this story! please up-date soon!
inuyasha532 chapter 6 . 3/8/2006
great job can't wait for chapter seven and the rest of your story bye and have a good evening
xXfictioncriticXx chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
i hope your not offended by any comments made:

good layout, the spacing makes it easier to read.

your main idea is a little overused.

although the characters are a bit OOC its ok because its your story. so no problems there.

your pace is a bit fast, and there isnt much depth in your words. some of the matters are too easily settled it isnt very believable. since the matters are solved quickly there are overall too many problems. overall your contents are too simple and flat.

minor spelling errors.

grammar needs improvement.

overall rating: 4.8 out of 10
FireGoddess2011 chapter 6 . 10/4/2005
that was cute keep writing it good so love ya bye
These Empty Walls chapter 3 . 9/30/2005
i like ur story, my computure wont let me read chap 4, but ill find a way... slipnot rocks!
RoyalWe chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
ok sorry shes not... lol i should have read the first thingy better. INUS the punk. yeah sorry bout that :D
RoyalWe chapter 2 . 9/15/2005
i really like ur fic! :D go you! but i gots a question... if kagz is punk how come she like jesse mccartney? cuz preps and all them like...him...yeah. but hey it's ur story! i'm just wondering...thats all. tootles
Waterandsky04 chapter 6 . 8/29/2005
hey awsome chapter update son
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