OMG! That was one of the most sweetest stories yet. (tearing up AGAIN). You've done an OUTSTANDING job. Loving it when Max & Alec get together.

I loved that her "heat" wasn't really heat at all. I've always thought all those pent up emotions would have to burst through the dam one day!

“I’m so stupid. It was you. It’s always been you.”

I ALMOST CRIED! That was an amazing story... Now im not even in the mood to finish writing mine. :(

great story,

~coolkitty

aw...sniffle...so cute!

I wish the ending weren't so abrupt because everything else had been so detailed and drawn out, but it was still really, really good.

Awesome work!

awwe man this rocked, loved the raw heated emotion but she wasnt in heat, e so great

Fantastically well written. You never cease to get the characterization dead on. Thanks for a great read.

BRILLIANT!

xx

oh,i hope this story go on,please update~

well,i think it would be more interesting if sketcky were there.

BRAVO! this was so cool...short and sweet and totally in character, for everyone!

It was awesome! Fantastic :) I totally love your story and this heatlike "not heat" idea.

a pretty cool story, a different twist on a much used scenario.

Aw! nice change from the usual "heat" stories.

This was great! Loved it! I wish you would write a sequel!

This is incredible. I like your different spin of Alec and Max's relationship. Such a sweet and tender fic! Two thumbs up.