| Reviews for Change for the Better |
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maxperseus130 chapter 2 . 12/17/2019 Suiton and Raiton. Not Mizu and Rai. Also, the point of Kakashi's test was 'no man left behind'. Teamwork was a secondary goal. |
GalaxyKitsune chapter 13 . 9/3/2019 I'm sad there have been no updates for over 10 years. |
Currahee506 chapter 13 . 10/23/2018 Update please |
Guest chapter 8 . 9/2/2018 Fucking idiot |
Goruden Fox chapter 1 . 8/9/2018 . |
Pater Mortis chapter 12 . 5/10/2018 You read Harry Potter before writing this didn’t you? Spell Genjutsu Magic Seals aka Fuinjutsu Sorcery Jutsu |
Pater Mortis chapter 11 . 5/10/2018 I think for Naruto to step out of his father’s shadow and become great is to vary his skillset. In the anime Naruto made a variant and completed the rasengan, i suggest, since naruto is leaning heavily on taijutsu, that he adds clones together with his taijutsu style. The flash only affects opponents (its a genjutsu) and would add his unpredictable-ness from cannon to your story, also since he already started training on using different jutsu and you havent really told us which element he thinks is easier to use, i suggest that his affinity would be fire. Since most the time he uses fire jutsu and i havent really paid enough attention for the other ones. His variation could be swirling mass of fire natured chakra, a fire vortex thats compressed... for hinata though instead of learning super strength she can adjust it to her taijutsu, regular juuken to incapitate, added strength to kill... maybe make her learn poisons and the like... |
Pater Mortis chapter 8 . 5/10/2018 I think the term you’re looking for isn’t ‘kinjutsu’ but instead it’s ‘kekkai genkai’ a kinjutsu anyone can learn whilst kekkai genkai are for specific bloodlines, like the sharingan or whatever bloodline you gave Naruto, also a kinjutsu can be learned by anyone but has a higher fatlity rate if you fail, if you learn the fireball technique and fail you burn your thorat, if you fail kage bunshin you run out of chakra and die |
Pater Mortis chapter 7 . 5/10/2018 Nawaki- Tsunade’s little bro Jiraya- toad sannin Haruno- Sakura’s last name Names you will need for your story, ill update when i see other characters come out...: Shizune Kato (Kato is Dan (lover of Tsunade) ‘s last name) Dan Kato (Tsunade’s lover) Tsunade Senju Kakashi Hatake Orochimaru Jiraya Hinata Hyuuga Hiruzen Sarutobi (third hokage) |
snorlax285 chapter 13 . 1/20/2018 Awesome story I think this should have been narutos life from the beginning in the show. I wish I could read more but thanks for the good read. |
TheGemNara chapter 10 . 11/17/2017 I WAS BORN IN SAIPAN IT IS BEAUTIFUL THERE THANK YOU SO MUCH |
TheGemNara chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 GOR LAST FUCKING TIME NO OFFENSE BUT NAPOLEON WAS A COOL 5'4 TALLER THAN THE AVERAGE FRENCHMAN, DO YOU HONESTLY THINK DURING THE TIMES OF NAPOLEON THEY WOULD LET A MIDGET RUN THE FRENCH ARMY, JEEZ YOU'D THINK THEY'D LEARN...*sigh* sorry I blew up |
Teasi chapter 6 . 10/8/2017 I love this so much. I loved the twist to how it usually is at the beginning where Sakura isn't just a Grade-ZZZ bitch. I'd give you that perfect emoji but...computer... |
Teasi chapter 2 . 10/8/2017 Kakashi, boy, if you keep your sexy perverted brain out of Naruto's Taijutsu, I'll pummel you. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2017 I don't think that Naruto would be that cruel to the Kyuubi even if it killed his parents. It's just not how he is. Sure he might be mad, but trying to torture it? OOC. |