| Reviews for Beginings |
|---|
nekumiko chapter 2 . 3/23/2014 Haha, Paris is a real comic relief. xD Hector's so sweet! And ooh, so that's what a Greek wedding is like. Wonder if it's still true in the modern times? Anyway, this is great. Sweet, really sweet. :) |
nekumiko chapter 1 . 3/23/2014 Hihi this is sweet! :))) Especially the part when Andromache went in his room and they saw each other up close for the first time... ooh and how he asked her to be his wife! Kyaaa! Hihi xD |
Norma Jean the Dancing Machine chapter 2 . 2/28/2010 i rememember this fic from years ago..i never reveiwed im sorry. buts its quite good1 |
Hillary Moore chapter 2 . 12/20/2006 make more chapters |
Constant Distraction chapter 2 . 7/26/2005 Just re-reading some stuff...have I mentioned recently how much I love this? The first chapter, with that kiss especially. Anyway, just telling you again what a great story this is. |
Gaby chapter 2 . 7/13/2005 I really liked it ! It was great !, you have to update soon PLEASE! |
miss-andromache too lazy to log in chapter 2 . 2/5/2005 I am sorry that I haven't reviewed before now...I actually did read this chapter before but was at work and had freezing computer problems. Anyways...enough with the excuses; This is fantastic, you did a really great job with the wedding its very different to other fics which is awesome (means that I am not skim reading, something I have a terrible habit of doing) Also love the constant reference to the Gods like talking about Dionysus etc. I have seen people try to reference the gods and fail miserably but it works so well with the flow of this piece. Good job...update soon! ~Mel |
Telhyandowen chapter 2 . 2/5/2005 That was really nice and very well written. You were able to really describe the ceremony while putting some little things in there, like Andromache resting her head on his shoulder and the Paris moments that helped it from becoming too ceremonial and not enough about the characters. The kisses at the end were so sweet. Hector is so sweet. It's so perfect. Good job! |
Ithil-valon chapter 2 . 2/4/2005 This is beautiful! I hope you will continue the story! It's fine with me if you up the rating! :) I found the ceremony to be very interesting and you explained it well. Thanks for that. |
soccer rocker chapter 2 . 2/2/2005 o this is so sweet...i bet this is how it was in real life between andromache and hector. please update about astynax (sp?) |
nntkmn chapter 2 . 2/2/2005 Great story, I love to read about Andromache and Hector falling in love. Hope you will continue |
lilycup chapter 2 . 2/1/2005 I enjoyed this chapter, I thought it was very good. I thought it was nice that Andromache rested her head on Hector's shoulder, so cute! I would like it if you would continue this as I really like this :D |
lady scribe of avandell chapter 2 . 2/1/2005 that was really sweet. very beautiful and simple. i want to be married like that (i seem to be saying that sort of thing a lot...)! *sigh* keep it coming, even if you do have to up the rating..lol. sere mi eru...lady scribe of avandell |
Blue Eyes At Night chapter 2 . 2/1/2005 very nicely done dear, i like this protrayal. more soon? i do hope so |
Spidey chapter 2 . 2/1/2005 Ok...you're forgiven. All forgiven. Cause that story rocked! Paris' suggestiveness, Hector's hectorness...I loved it. No more dreams for you, though. The end, with the kiss, made my heart flip flop- it was so well written! Ok, I'm at school and I need to go before Iget caught, but great job! |