Thanks for the story and yes I cried when shego cried at Kim's funeral

well, i know it's been years since this story has been updated, but i hope that you will look back at this story and decide to continue this.

After the waitress had walked away, the raven haired woman leaned forward, "You constantly surprise me, Ronnie. I was sure you were a bacon kind of guy."

Ron held up his index finger and pointed to himself, "Jewish, no pork."

What about the whole meat mixed with dairy thing they have thathe always breaks with Bueno Nacho

Oh, come on, I know it's been more than a year, and I am not the best in the world to talk to another writer about procractination (G), but this is just to good to stop here. Ignoring the angst of Kim's death, you have a masterpiece on the scale of "Epic Stitch" going here, please do not abandon it.

Looking forward to more,

Spectre

Hi,

I was just re reading this story, KP Death and rebirth and couldn't pull up 2 chapters. (11 and 16 or 18 I don't remember which.) Thought you'd like to know. It might be something with my computer or something else. Are you planning to add to it soon, or is it continued in another story?

Live Large,

pbow

haha...this is turning out to be very interesting. i hope that you keep up the good work. update asap

Wow! Great story. Having Kim Come back as a ghost was brilliant. having the rest of the girls fighting over Ron is very entertaining. Good Job.

Interesting so far. Damn that's gotta hurt for Ron to love Kim for so long and so deeply only to be considered undateble because she's all about her little perfection dreamboy. Sickening. Read Cyberwraiths piece and there's a perfect line for Kim's obliviousness:

"You’re right. Kim will love me, Mon. When she’s older, and she’s tired of guys prettier and better than me of leaving her in the lurch. When she’s tired of the chase. That’s when she’ll go back to ol’, dependable Ron. And that’s what kills me; that I’m her second choice"

That's sums it up perfectly. Kim's so smart but can't see her perfect man right in front of her nose.

Don't know if your planning to update this anytime soon. If not, thanks for the very enjoyable read. You've put some serious thought into these characters and their motives.

Till next time...adios.

cool story

keep up the good work

lol funny two chapters keep up the good work

awesome keep going...oblivian

Just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story. And I'm also looking forward to the nex Chapter.

I have to say, having KP as ghost is a different take on things. However, your plot has me well in hand.

I look forward to seeing were you are taking us on this ride.

Star_Eva01

Alright, Ron! Time to step up and tell the ladies to step off, eh? And Shego and Junior... Can you imagine the children?

Minor nitpick: "This will be no difference." Shouldn't that be "This will be no different."?

I agree, 22 chapters and this will be the 100th review... I believe we can do better, folks. Come on, does it REALLY take that long to jot down a quick impression of the chapter?

Thoughts on 'smuff'; I'm all for it, of course. As long as it adds to the story, and doesn't *become* the story...

Still a lot of curveballs you can throw here, G. Keep it coming!

Shego and S.S.J.

I like it. Kim coming along for the ride I assume will have consequences. And if Monty broke the rules I think all of the villains will want a chunk of him.

Kim gets to go with but I wonder what the other three will come up with while he's gone?

Can't wait to see the convo with Ron, Shego and Junior on the plane with Kim observing and making Ron look/sound crazy.

Thanks for the great read!

Shego and Junior... well, stranger things have happened... especially considering Kim is a ghost. lol

Eagerly awaiting more!