slap me! i new this was a death fic i now im crying i love john to much

oh my god that was so sad you made me cry

Will someone please slap me for reading a fic when I know it was going to be a death fic? Seriously! You actually had me crying, just a few tears but you still had me crying. I've only ever cried over one other fic. I still can't believe it, for a while I thought he was going to be okay, that he would live but then you through us the expceted (or unexpected, not sure which) curveball. This is an amazingly powerful story. You can never stop writing, if you got my crying I know you have true talent at writing. Bravo to you and your story!

yet again a brilliant death fic has caused me to run out of kleenxes! that was one of the saddest and most beautiful stories I've read. The emotions and actions of each character were perfect. Well done, it was fantastic.

You made me cry... dagnabit! Which isn't a bad thing.

I award you three gold stars, and one of those annoyingly pink "Well, done!" stickers in appreciation of this story.

This was such a plausible outcome for John's injuries. And I was happy to see the mixture of canons.

Keep up the good work.

Oh no. I was really hoping everything would end happily ever after. I loved every minute of it apart from John dying of course. I really wanted to cry at some parts.

Okay! Thoroughly depressed now. Loved it, in a ripping my heart out kind of way, you have time consider writing an alternate ending where John lives. Then I could be depressed when I wanna and have a boost when I need it. You fully write well enough to have that kind of effect!

sory i may like your story but I hate character death. If you base your story on the TV series why do you kill off the main character? I am very sad, very sad. ... sorry I do not want to continue to read unless you bring him back.

thanks!

the end has come and yet it is sad, it is fitting. john had an effect and it WILL remain! great story!

Great story!

Unexpected twists here and there! Really, well done! Keep up the good work!

Sigh, thanks for the warning. I should have believed you.

OMG that was so sad, i was crying so much my contact lenses fell out! and i hardly ever cry. Great story though, definatly one of my favourite! Keep up the good work :)

Nice story.

But did you have to kill John? He's one of my favorite Thunderbirds characters.

Are you going to do a sequel showing the Tracy's reactions to John's death?

OMG i actually cried when i read that chapter, ohh how bout john comes into alans dreams and tells him it wasn't his fault or something.

Aw! This ending made me cry! Why did you have to kill him anyway? pot! It was really beautiful though...thank you so much for writing it, it's my fav thunderbirds story! I really hate you for killing him though! :P ;)