This is a great story- I agree too- just don't let him find me.

Love this story!

Yeah, I do think you're right about Albel. This whole "I'm a jackass" thing is because he's afraid to let anyone get close to him. He needs some love, to be sure. I loved this. *squeak* o

*_* I .. adore you. Thank you. Calming certainly, and just enough of the game so I knew what was going on...*sigh* I need a new PS2 so I get my Albel ending... ;; all those weeks of making sure I did things just right so Albel was the highest..:D Hope to see more from you! Bye!

Crimson Scourge scene? How do you get it? I'm at the part where you need to go and get the Sacred Orb and use it against Luther and I haven't come across anything like it. Please, e-mail me and help! *puppy eyes*

Good introspection. Haven't gotten to the Crimson Scourge scene yet, unfortunately. The spoilers in this story didn't bother me much because the story was excellent. The grammar needs some tweaking here and there, but it's better than most. Good job!

TDG

You wanna know what song would go perfectly with this fic? Yakusoku...Or, "Promise" In English...The two lines that probably have some relation to this story would probably be...

The future that reflects in my eyes is

The star of destiny that I kept on searching for

The bond that overcame the two times

Connects you and I

To be embracing this light is

For the sake of the future that you wished for

Because the little promise connects

Our past and present

If you think about it, it makes sense, right? ...Right? . Er...You have a good story here! - Keep it up!

Love your fic!I find it really cute!Write more please!

Whee~ I liked this a lot. You write Albel quite well.. I always thought he'd be kind of a weak-minded person too, since he seems to randomly throw insults out at everything as some kind of sense of security. Or at least that's how I see it.

And Fayt/Albel is so cute.. So cute and so likely. I hope you write more, I'll be looking forward to reading if you do.

*Giggles with delight*

Indeed, it was excellent...Don't tell me this is a one chapter piece?

*eyes fill with tears*

Anyway. As always, all Albel/Fayt fanfics rock. I put you on my favorites.

Onwards!

I like it

Yeah it was serious one but you did and good Job on this one it only one shot...well if you want to you can make another one later...you have the Original? wow one of these days I want to read it I'm thinking you didn't post it hear becuse it wasn't allowed or something? I don't know but nice work.

tbc...na?

definitly have a talent for portrayed Albel perfectly.I like fics like this,when they focus on a certain part in the game's storyline and show that part from another character's point of done!Keep up the great work!