Your stories are breathing new life into my muse.

I like this. Peter Pan is one of my favorite movies. I was a little confused at some points but that doesn't change the fact it's a good story

I was never one to fall in love or even like the old or new Peter Pan movies but I must say you have written this very well. I love the way you described the mermaids (I'm a lover of mermaids!), realizing the ruthless-man child has developed a heart.

And I just love the way you wrote the last bit on the lines out of the movie. Very well done! :D

Banshee Queen.

Very good, sinister and evokative, with the nastiness so often left out of Neverland.

Wow! This is really interesting...especially the last few lines. Excellent! :)

Dude, this was really good! It had that creepy but spellbinding air which personified the mermaids in the film.

An excellent piece of work you've got here.

WONDERFUL job on this! I'm asbolutely original, and written so well! I love the concept here...that the mermaids would notive the changes that Peter himself might not. Easily onto my favourites list!

Keep up the amazing work!

~Jurei6

Wow. Quite dark. But very enjoyable.

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Chiruken

There is a theory that everything was called to neverland and nothing is native to the isle. If that is so, then this story makes a wondrous view on things. Most people agree on this for the pirates, but I never really stoped to consider what it would mean for the mermaids.

oh, wow! This was enchanting to read. You have a very poetic style in you're writing. Very nice. I hope to see more from you.

that was really well written. )

This is a very good story. It has a very mysterious and creepy air to it. It has a certain elegance to it and sets me in a strange state of mind. Dis story shall be a favorite of mine! Congrats for you!

Quite nice. You seemed to be a good author. Hope to see a long story.

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I love this fic. It's very poetic.

I really like this! I hope you update soon! I think the mermaids were the most fasinating part of the 2003 movie!

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