LILY ISN"T HIS MOTHER? i-i'm fin to cry. also NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

:'c

Nice Idea for a plot here.
Sad that you do not intend to finish it.
Have put it on my follow list just in case you ever reconsider ;)

The plot idea of James and Severus having a child is one I haven't seen before and I like how you have Severus and Harry interacting. I'm sorry you haven't gone on with this. I am marking this to be followed in case you do some day decide to continue.

I really would appreciate it if you put somewhere in the description, or even just the 'authors notes', that this is an incomplete/abandoned fic. I make a point of only reading finished stories, because I hate cliff-hangers. It's bad enough when what I'm reading turns out to be 'part one' of an unfinished series, but marking an incomplete story as complete is, quite frankly, cruel!

I wish you didn't mark it as complete since its not. Some of us, me included, only search for stories marked "complete" and its a huge disappointment and waste of time to discover its not.

You called Harry a girl three times in your story.

Once in chapter seven when James said: she moved and than again in chapter eight where Lily say's: she not has strong enough for you to have her outside of you yet !

Have you done this because James, Sirius and Lily think that James is having a girl or what ?

The Crimson Mage.

This is where I quit reading.

You should try writing down you plot/story line before actually writing the story. It'll help with planning, which may help keep down the number of ridicules plot holes.

Question three, what year is is as you neglected to mention it. Any clues about this were contradictory.

Question four, how can you go through life without knowing that going without water for several days will kill you?

And let's ignore all of the other plot holes your first chapter has...

i am very intrigued... im glad you got the spying issue out of the way.. wondering how sev ans james came to be in a situation where they shared drinks and potions.. was james and lily already married ... who knew about this ... remus... siri ... poppy ... we see a bit of severus rather than the git ... we see a harry who is desparate for someone to trust and care for ... what is up with weasel and granger.. as well as the oter weasleys... hmmmm

interesting.
slytherin house

Please mark as abandoned if you wont continue

1) Sev wigs out.

2) Poppy arranges for the two of them to be locked in a room until they become civil.

3) Salazar Slytherin.

OMG UPDATE IT'S BEEN 6 YEARS! i like this story, dont let it go to waste. House: Slytherin.

Slytherin I am and love your story I do! Sorry I just got done watching all 3 Star Wars movies. I love Yoda.

I can't wait to see the answers to all the questions you posed at the end of each chapter. Especially how Severus is going to react and why Harry doesn't trust Dumbledore, though I have my suspicions on that one. Plz update asap.

wow...are you going to continue this? you really have my attention!

Neat-o. This is interesting. And somewhat believable! (which is really hard for that pairing!) I like it! Please continue this soon! (Oh yeah i'm a Hufflepuff. Badger, Badger)