Love the fact that you put a proof in the story.

interesting story, I like it.

This is amazing, I love the style! I never read that part of the manga, but I understood what was happening! Wow...just wow...

thought provoking, yet, seemingly, pointless. Funny, yet sad. Depressing, yet full of hope. I like this. indescribible. I liked the Citrus Senshi! :)

I DIDNT EVEN KNOW it was a Narie original 'till I looked at the bottom. Someone wake me up so I can applaud! OH NO! I MADE A COMPLETE BAKA OF MYSELF! IM SO SORRY! GREAT STORY AS USUAL!

Narie, I read this story on another site. Scratches head (yep a little cat-like) maybe on ASMR? And it still remains one of my favorites. Perhaps one of the most revealing and poetic stories about her. And so short and to the point. sigh what talent. Almost wants makes other fanfic authors want to cry. Keep it up this story is just perfect. Not a word too much or too few. :)...

First off, I love manga-based fics. Second, although this story was strange at times, I thought the idea of incorporating an equation into a story about Mercury was great. This is certainly an original story and style.

Holy...awesome story. As a Calculus Goddess myself, this was deeply entertaining. As a writer, I bow before your superior style, language, and ability to weave beauty with words. All I have is a cat whose last whisker doesn't appear when I review things. ..

Awsome! No words can describe. Keep writing!

wow. amazing. really awesome. (guess you could tell that i like it) very original, but the character seems to be lacking in some strong emotion. don't know. but i like it, i mean really like it

Incredible...this is truly amazing. I love manga-based stories, and this one is fascinating. The math only adds to the character of it, making it more Ami-like, and also more unusual.