love the story keep updating

wow im loving the story and now ill be extremely upset if you dont get around to updating this soon bc im emotionaly hooked concerning what is going to happen!

*SPEECHLESS* BC I AM SPEECHLES WITH SUCH A PHONOMINAL STROYY I'll SAY ONE WORD! :D! UPDATE! _

omg major cliffy and i definately did not see that coming. i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon! :D

Why are you taking so long to update? Please stop the torture

omigosh...I knoe I haven't been keeping up with your story but when I finally do come across it...there was only one more chapter why must you torment me so? hahahaha...well I hope you update soon! Lovin' ur story! O

more i want more i cant stand waitin for the next chapter !

so cruel to take Leije away maybe later u could bring him back like what Yuna did XD

such a nice story but it made Gippal a bad person but Leije sounds so much better 4get Gippal keep Leiji

Hi... uhm first time reading... i'm hook it wqas pretty cool... 'cept i think that Gippal knows Auron since... they had a little conversation... in Gippal's sphere in the game o.o yeah i remember it well since i couldn't stop laughin when i hear done of them say jackass... [SPoilers! sry..]

I just love some of the reviews you get...people are really creative when they try to tell you how much they love your story.

well anyways, I particularly like Leije and his role in this story. I was disappointed and fascinated that he turned out to be unsent just like Auron. (Being that he's related to Auron in the first place and that Auron is my favorite has nothing at all to do with it ofcourse) It was an excellent plot twist, but I loved the fact of him and Rikku together as well as it relating to the story Mai and Celisee wanted for their children. But seeing as this is a Rikku/Gippal tale, it's alright. I'm normally not too fond of the couple (more specifically Gippal) but occasionally there will be the exception. In anycase, continue with this; your style with words is excellent

lol you are soo cruel in the end lol

I really like it! I hadn't read any of it until I saw it today, and I read all of what you have up so far! I couldn't stop reading until the end! It's a very well written story, and I hope you update soon!

wow...that was one of the best written stories i've read. This is real good. wow. i'm impressed. DOn't stopp wrting for anything. it's real good so far. i want to know what happens afterwards.

peace

NO! LEIJIE! Argh! Oh, just saying that there was a part in the chappie that repeated itself... this is EXCETLENT! I love it! Argh! Y DID U LET HIM DIE! ARGH! I' love Auron's character, and now u let his son die? I really enjoy this story, (i'm a neew commer) and update soon!