I am leaving this review because you have not allowed PMing, even though you advertized as a beta. I wanted to send you a beta request, and this seems to be the only way to contact you. I have begun reading your story, as well. If you would like to hear my beta request, please allow me to PM you? Story from How to Train Your Dragon, genre:horror/romance

Please, please, PLEASE update this one day. I need to read more.

-The Raven

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *dies*

AHHHHH. THE ANGST! :D

-The Raven

I... love this. Wow.

Off to read more! :D

-The Raven

this story is simply incredible! Please, please updated soon!

Wow. This is... well... wow. This is very well written. You expressed everything wonderfully to the point that I understand Violet a lot more than I used to. These first four chapters had me captured. Great introduction. I can feel the build up to whatever it is will happen to violet. Can hardly wait for the next update.

Post it whenever its ready, hopefully it wont take too long.

Later;)

I don't know how you did it, but every chapter literally had chills going up my spine. It's so disturbing and I keep thinking it'll get happy and then it doesn't! I love it! Keep writing it please!

Hey thx for updating! I am really loving this so far! I loved the last part I cant wait to see what happens! Please update soon! :]

Okay, so Violet doesn't have her powers anymore, right? I got kinda lost there. And what does Frozone mean by what he said? I'm not sure, but to me it sounded like he was saying that Metroville was gonna pay for Violet's power-removal..

Damn this story ROCKS! :o)

It's so friggin awesome! You cannot - I repeat - CANNOT leave it there! Or I will shoot you. And then myself. (J/k, lol)

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!

PLEASE!

Wow. Ever so angsty. I think if it were to continue... the more proactive, angry approach of supers might move it along nicely.

Oh...I did not see that coming. I can't wait for this fic to be updated. Keep up the good work.

Hi there!

I started reading this story, and I like the way you've structured the plot - you know where it's going and what you want to do with it. Normally I don't review stories (I'm chronically lazy, go figure), but I felt honour-bound to review this one, though probably not for the reason you might think. (I'm gonna feel such a bitch for this...)

I find that the language of the story doesn't flow for me. It's a little too complex to create a steadily-flowing narrative, and feels a bit thesaurus-y (I first noticed this in the first line where you use the word 'manifested' where 'used' would do - 'manifested' just doesn't seem to sit right in the context.) It just feels a little bit over-described, and maybe with adjectives in places where they don't need to be (like where you describe the plane wreck as an 'unfortunate incident' – I don't think 'unfortunate' is needed to emphasise that, and as a choice of word, it feels trivialised.)

Sorry about that, I feel awful for saying it, but the English Literature student in me wouldn't shut up. Bar my ramblings, I really like this story, and I can't wait to see where it's headed. Myabe just simplify the language for the sake of syntax and flow?

If you disagree with what I've said, I won't blame you for it. I sound, to my own ears (metaphorically speaking), like an nitpicky critic (and also exceeding arrogant in parts. *wince*), although that's no basis for inaccuracy. And sorry for the long review, I tend to ramble a bit.

I look forward to more chapters!

~Rack/Lucy

This story has finaly been updated! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

OH, joy! I had all but given up on this one as yet another promising fic cut tragically short. Thank you so much for continuing! This is such a nice surprise.

I'm curious by now... where is Dash during all this? What are his thoughts? I hope we find out.