nice job!

Sad, but probably would happen.

Keep writing.

-Taylor Tonks

pretty good

I really liked this. It was quiet and somber in it's angst. I know it's been years since you wrote it but I'd love to see you turn it into a two shot with their next 24 hrs in the second chapter. I'd like to see what Peter thinks of MJ's news and how she tells him. I'd also like to see if he can keep his promise to his wife and put her first.

Thanks for the ficlet!

Very poignant. I hope that MJ does get her one day (after all, they must get a little time together if she's pregnant!). I hope that you write more stories too, because your stories are usually very thought-provoking.

Aww this is really good! You're great at writing Peter/MJ one-shots! write more! :D

That was great. I do like to point out that the Black Cat was once an enemy to Spider-Man but she is now an ally. It's tough for MJ being the wife of a superhero. Maybe sometime she should talk to Peter about how she feels and that may ease her thoughts a little. But MJ knew what she was getting into when she married Peter but that doesn't mean she can easily live with the fact that one day Peter may not come home when he is out as Spider-Man. When Peter finds out that MJ is pregnant that may limit his time as Spider-Man. But like MJ said, only Peter would know that answer to that.

So sweet. I like how this went.

liked it? loved it :) sorry it tooka while to review, 's email thing is down, so I have no clue which of my fave authors have updated, have to check everything the old fashioned way :) but yeah, great story!

oh! angsty! I love it! I feel sorry for Mj, having to worry so much about peter... and with a baby .. so interesting! great one there

So very very sad! You really make me feel bad for MJ, in what should be a happy situation for her. At least she'll have one day...

Nicely done. MJ's thoughts are resigned yet hopeful, which makes sense after being married to Spider-Man for so long. Would be nice to read more on why she hasn't told him yet and how he reacts when she does and will she get those twenty-four hours alone with him like he promised. Thanks for sharing this:)