I LOVE this story! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

What a nice epilogue! I always love happy endings! :) Thank you so much for sharing your story with us!

I loved that story! I think that you should write a sequal.

Great story, I think a sequel would be great.

Wow, I think you did a great job with this ending. Jesse's speech was right on and I liked the glimpse into the missing year. I think it was pretty complete. Dare I say thank you for the honor of mention. I think I like being Adam's girlfriend. He wouldn't have to pull too hard on those strings to get me to help him out. Maybe I could live in Sanctuary, too. Thanks for writing. I'm off to read more. Juliet looks very intriguing.

i loved it i definitley want a sequel if u dont write one i will be sorely disappointed. i love jesse's speech it was really good. i liked the part well i actually cant pick a certain part i loved the whole chapter it was amazing.

Okay, now I'm pissed! I cannot, repeat, cannot believe that you cliffed it there. Not reviewing again until you write more. hmpf!*

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YOU LEFT IT THERE! you updated everything without telling me! You are the most EVIL and VILE person on the face of the EARTH!

not really. just upset over where you left it

you must continue soon you evil little woman. i shall catch you online soon enough!

OMG what happened to shal please dont make her die

So Jesse can be sneaky. I love it. I understand we're reliving the birthday and can't wait to read more. How will Brennan change the past and save Shalimar? Remember to take it slow and give us all the intense detail. I'll be watching for more. Thanks.

Hey, it's me. Yes, I'm still here. Just very busy. I really liked this chapter. I liked the explaination of Cheri's deal. The scene with Jesse and Lexa was great. I love the firm stand Jesse is taking with her. "You'll just have to listen when I say 'no'." I'm waiting to see what happens at the meet. You know how much I love Adam. Thanks for continuing.

OH The suspense is killing me! You have to keep going!

why did jesse put stuff in her drink. and that was a great chapter. did you have this story up before cuz im sure i read something like this before. but it is really good keep writing.

hey... sorry 'bout not being here lately, but it's not my fault!

... okay it is my fault. I failed a class and have to take summer school, which got me banned from the computer. email me for the new times that we can talk.

and this chapter was great and I loved it!

Nice. Not rushed. Sweet scene with Brennan and Lexa and I love the relationship between Shal and Jesse. Keep going.