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DamaNegra90 chapter 1 . 10/27/2016 I've always wondered HOW this could have happened. THANK YOU VERY MUCH! :D |
AvidReader2236 chapter 2 . 12/1/2014 A great companion. |
AvidReader2236 chapter 1 . 12/1/2014 I was a bit worried when you mentioned Knott- but everything sorted itself out in the end. Well done! |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/5/2013 Excellent! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2013 This was very cute! I love how you nailed the way Hermione was thinking; well done! |
Wittyheroine chapter 2 . 6/15/2011 Loved it! :) |
rhiawoods chapter 2 . 11/24/2005 You did the house-mouth mix up again. Unless you really meant to use house. Then I fear for your sanity. |
books4me chapter 2 . 10/6/2005 Good stuff. |
Summer Raindrop chapter 2 . 7/23/2005 I luvved this story! Even though you said you finished it, you should write about how Hermionie got ready for the Yule Ball and her view of the ball! Then, it would be ubber god! |
Pobbin chapter 1 . 7/18/2005 I'm just throwing this in with my email adress so you can contact me if you're really insulted or something. I hate people who flame but don't leave contact information. Though I don't consider what I said to be a flame, you might disagree. I've never flamed in my life really. Still, just in case. |
Pobbin chapter 2 . 7/18/2005 Great job, I';m in a hurry because I have to go to work, so this will be short, but I LOVED this. I thought Nott's offer was especially awesome, and Neville was so cute! I love him... My one problem was with Ron's part. It didn't really show much of what Hermione was thinking, it was all just dialogue. And since it was dialogue we'd already read, it just wasn't interesting. It didn't really seem like a good way to end your fic, as the rest of it was so much better. I hate to be so critical, but I kind of wish you'd re-write that last bit, as it just wasn't as good as your usual writing. But if you showed more of what Hermione was thinking, and went back and fixed the dialogue so that it was actually what was said (I know you didn't have your book there, but the differences are obvious, and somewhat distracting) it could have a REALLY powerful ending, and the whole fic would be so much better. Sorry again, I don't know if you're the kind of author who appreciates constructive criticism, but I really loved the beginning of the fic, and I'd like to see it end just as well. Thanks. |
Five Star Insanity chapter 2 . 7/7/2005 This was an awesome little piece, I've most of your one-shots, and I admire the way you pull the canon together with the fiction. Something I myself am not able to do nearly as well... Rock On! F.S.I. |
autolux chapter 2 . 3/10/2005 Cute. [!] |
Barzel chapter 2 . 1/24/2005 Very well written. I liked the way you showed Hermione's frustration without over blowing the whole confrontation with Ron like others do. -You show them, girl! |
Lillynner chapter 2 . 1/19/2005 Hey That was great! Please UPDATE soon! |