Reviews for Broken Dreams
Cayla Marshall chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Such a sad story. Makes me just want to hold poor Smithy & cuddle all that pain & trauma away. So beautifully written. So well done to you. A couple more chapters would be great. To see if he does eventually open up to Mickey & tell him the truth about himself...the 'friend' who's been raped. Absolutely well done here...
waterlooroadfan2012 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
this is really good :) expecialy the email parts
carter chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
so how's about a second chapter?
SilverHowler chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
OMG, poor Smithy...plz write more, wanna know what happens to him! *puppy eyes*
Dragonmaster Kurai chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
So what happens next? I want MORE! UPDATE!

cya

DK
nicola chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
It was fantastic. You have a real gift, I felt so much for him i just wanted to help him. You are a fantastic writer! Although I would love Mickey to realise
smithyfan chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
Plz plz write more. Thats really deep. Im a huge fan of smithy and I almost cried reading this i just wanted to help him ;( I cant wait for the next chapter and see how mickey replies as i really liked mickey 2! That for such a movin 1st chapter keep it up!
eamer4simon chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
pls write more pls pls pls
PinVerified chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
guh. GUH! i don't know what to say. perhaps the best smiffy fic i've found and super written to boot. hats off and a gold star for you.
griiffins chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
Wow, that's deep. Poor Smithy! Well written, well detailed, good job!